Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammatical accuracy, use a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g., “I like taking photos of mountain forests”), and avoid redundancy. Add a linking word when giving the second idea (e.g., “but” → “however”).

Example: I enjoy taking photos of mountain forests because I love the peaceful scenery and natural colors. However, since I live in the town, I usually go to the central park to practice photography on weekends.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear preference sentence (urban or rural), then provide specific reasons and use linking words. Fix basic grammar and word choice (e.g., “In my daily life I mostly see urban areas”). Avoid incomplete sentences and finish ideas (complete the thought about museums).

Example: I mostly prefer urban views because I’m used to city life and I enjoy the variety of architecture and street scenes. For example, I like visiting museums and cafes in town, which give me interesting subjects to photograph.

Suggestion: State your preference clearly and support it with specific reasons. Correct sentence structure and vocabulary (e.g., “I prefer visiting other countries because it exposes me to different cultures and landscapes”). Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid unclear phrases like “there's you.”

Example: I prefer seeing views in other countries because traveling exposes me to different cultures and landscapes, which inspires my creativity. For instance, seeing traditional markets or unusual architecture abroad often gives me fresh ideas for photography.

× But I living in the town I go to shooting in the Central Park.

✓ But I live in the town, so I go shooting in Central Park.

Original sentence uses 'living' without an auxiliary, causing a missing finite verb. This is a present participle error; use the simple present 'live' for habitual state. Also add 'so' to connect clauses and omit 'the' before proper place names like 'Central Park' when not required. Suggestion: use 'I live' for present habitual actions and connect ideas with conjunctions.

× In my real life I everyday view is urban areas.

✓ In my daily life, most of what I see every day is urban areas.

The sentence mixes word order and uses 'everyday' incorrectly. 'Everyday' as adjective should come before a noun; 'every day' (two words) means each day. Use 'In my daily life' and 'most of what I see every day' to express frequency. Also keep plural 'areas' but ensure correct sentence structure.

× This means go out to the room and see through all the towns.

✓ This means I go outside my home and see the town landscapes around me.

The original lacks a clear subject and uses awkward prepositions ('to the room', 'see through all the towns'). Fix by supplying subject 'I' and use natural collocations: 'go outside my home' and 'see the town landscapes.' Ensure prepositions match intended meaning.

× But I really like the museums and.

✓ But I really like museums and cultural sites.

Sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'and.' Provide the second item after 'and' to complete the coordination. Also drop the definite article before 'museums' for general preference. Use 'cultural sites' or another noun to complete the thought.

× In my opinion, I prefer to see will other countries because there's you.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer to see other countries because there are new experiences.

'See will other countries' incorrectly mixes 'will' with 'prefer to' and 'there's you' is ungrammatical. Remove 'will' and use 'see other countries' (present infinitive) after 'prefer.' Replace 'there's you' with a meaningful subject like 'there are new experiences.' Match tense and provide clear object.

× It's take your field to strange and explore your mind to be creative.

✓ It takes you out of your comfort zone and helps you explore your mind and be more creative.

Original uses incorrect subject-verb agreement ('It's take') and awkward phrases ('take your field to strange'). Use 'It takes you out of your comfort zone' for the intended idea and match singular verb 'takes' with subject 'It.' Add conjunctions and parallel structure 'explore your mind and be more creative.'