Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear, contains many grammar and vocabulary errors, and is hard to follow. Aim to give a clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting details using linking words. Use correct verbs (e.g., ‘taking’ not ‘attacking’), and be specific (e.g., ‘mountain landscapes’, ‘city skylines’). Keep to 2–4 sentences and avoid unrelated fragments.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I like photographing mountain landscapes and city skylines because they capture the mood of a place. Also, I often take selfies to remember special moments when I travel.

Suggestion: Avoid asking the examiner to repeat the question repeatedly; instead ask a short clarification if needed (e.g., ‘Do you mean urban or rural views?’). Then answer directly with a topic sentence and a reason. Use linking words (because, however, for example) and be specific about what you like in each setting.

Example: Do you mean views in cities or in the countryside? I prefer rural views because I enjoy wide-open spaces and natural scenery; for example, I like forests and hills where it is quiet and green.

Suggestion: Do not refuse to answer; if you are unsure, ask a brief clarification and then give an opinion. Provide a clear topic sentence and at least one reason or example. Keep it concise and natural.

Example: I usually prefer views in other countries because seeing different cultures and landscapes is exciting; for example, I enjoyed the coastal scenery when I visited Portugal last year.

× Yes, I love attacking pictures especially of the different views like MMM landscapes and the cities caves and also enjoy talking when I travel. Selfie because water help me remember special moments.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures, especially of different views like mountains, landscapes, and cityscapes, and I also enjoy taking selfies when I travel because they help me remember special moments.

Multiple issues: 'attacking' is a spelling/word choice error; correct verb is 'taking' (Verb + -ing form issue, ID 8). 'MMM' appears to be filler or typo; replaced with 'mountains' to make sense. 'the cities caves' is unclear and incorrect; changed to 'cityscapes' (noun choice) and listed items with commas (sentence structure). 'enjoy talking' is wrong word choice; should be 'enjoy taking selfies' (verb and noun choice). 'Selfie because water help me' is fragmented and contains spelling/word choice ('water' -> 'they') and subject-verb agreement ('help' needs to agree with plural 'they'). Overall suggestions: proofread for typos, choose correct verb forms (take -> taking), use parallel structures in lists, and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Sorry but I don't understand what this mean exactly. What's mean? Prefer views on your pan areas or areas I don't know what's that?

✓ Sorry, but I don't understand what this means exactly. Do you mean: 'Do you prefer views in your urban areas or rural areas?'

Errors: 'what this mean' has subject-verb agreement/present tense error -> 'means' (Present tense / subject-verb agreement, IDs 6 and 27). 'What's mean?' is ungrammatical; use 'What does that mean?' or rephrase. The following fragment 'Prefer views on your pan areas or areas I don't know what's that?' is unclear and badly structured (sentence structure error, ID 26). Suggestion: respond by asking for clarification using proper question form 'Do you mean...' and correct verb forms. Use clear vocabulary 'urban' and 'rural'.

× Sorry, but can you skip this question because don't I don't have answer and I don't understand.

✓ Sorry, but could you skip this question? I don't have an answer and I don't understand it.

Problems: run-on and incorrect auxiliary usage ('can you skip' is acceptable but 'because don't I don't have answer' is ungrammatical). 'don't I don't have' is redundant and incorrect (sentence structure / auxiliary misuse, ID 26). Missing article before 'answer' (Article errors, ID 22). Also add 'it' to refer to the question. Suggestion: break into two sentences for clarity, use 'could you' or 'can you', remove redundancy, include articles and pronouns as needed.