Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise, correct grammar, and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Use linking words and avoid repetition. Also use more appropriate vocabulary (e.g., "post on social media" instead of "publish on my social").

Example: Yes, I really enjoy photographing different views. For example, when I visit a new place I often take pictures of the landscapes because they are stunning; then I usually edit a few and post them on my social media to share with friends.

Suggestion: Start with a clear direct answer, then give specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar and avoid filler phrases (e.g., "just"). Be specific about what you like in rural areas (green spaces, quiet, nature).

Example: I prefer rural areas. Firstly, rural places have more green spaces and natural scenery, which I find relaxing. Secondly, they are quieter than Jakarta, so I can focus on taking better photos without crowds.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer followed by clear, specific reasons and avoid hesitations. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a brief explanation or example about travel difficulties. Correct small grammar issues (e.g., "choose my country" → "my own country").

Example: I prefer views in my own country because it has many beautiful rural places with unique landscapes. However, visiting some of them can be difficult since there is limited accommodation and transport, so I usually plan trips carefully in advance.

× I love taking pictures a lot especially when I visit a new places and landscapes are very stunning and then the scenery is like a jaw-dropping view and I set a lot of photos to publish on my social maybe.

✓ I love taking pictures a lot, especially when I visit new places; the landscapes are very stunning and the scenery is jaw-dropping, so I take many photos to maybe publish on my social media.

Errors: 'visit a new places' mixes singular article with plural noun (singular/plural issue but fixed via removing article) and incorrect verb 'set' used for taking/placing photos. Also sentence run-on and awkward phrasing. Suggestions: remove 'a' before 'new places', use 'take' instead of 'set', add commas and semicolon to separate ideas, use 'many photos' for quantity and 'social media' for correct noun. Grammar types applied: 1 (Singular and plural issue) and 8 (Verb + -ing form) and 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× I would prefer to just rural areas because there are a lot of things that we can't find in the urban areas, especially in Jakarta, like in surrounding of us we can't find the the green areas.

✓ I would prefer rural areas because there are many things we can't find in urban areas, especially in Jakarta; in our surroundings we can't find green spaces.

Errors: 'prefer to just rural areas' uses incorrect infinitive and too many function words; use 'prefer rural areas'. 'a lot of things' is acceptable but 'many things' is more natural. 'in surrounding of us' is wrong preposition/word order; use 'in our surroundings'. 'the the green areas' duplicate 'the' and 'green areas' is awkward; use 'green spaces'. Suggestions: remove unnecessary 'to' and 'just', correct prepositions and word order, and use natural collocations like 'green spaces'. Grammar types applied: 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions) and 26 (Sentence structure errors) and 1 (Singular and plural issue regarding 'green areas' optional).

× That's really interesting for me. Thank you.

✓ That's really interesting to me. Thank you.

Error: preposition 'for' is not incorrect strictly but 'interesting to me' is the more idiomatic collocation. Suggestion: use 'interesting to me' for natural expression. Grammar types applied: 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions) and 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× I prefer to choose my country because my country has a lot of, uh, beautiful places, especially in the rural areas, but it's hard to go there because there is no good accommodation for going there.

✓ I prefer my own country because it has many beautiful places, especially in rural areas, but it's hard to go there because there are no good accommodations.

Errors: 'prefer to choose my country' is wordy; use 'prefer my own country'. Repetition of 'my country' can be replaced by 'it'. 'a lot of' becomes 'many' for countable 'places'. 'there is no good accommodation for going there' is ungrammatical: use plural 'accommodations' or 'accommodation' uncountable with different phrasing. Suggestions: simplify 'prefer', use 'many', and change to 'there are no good accommodations' or 'there is no good accommodation' with clearer context. Grammar types applied: 6 (Present tense issue) and 22 (Article errors) and 1 (Singular and plural issue).