Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clearer and more grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct verb forms, and use concise supporting details. Use linking words if adding details. Also choose precise vocabulary (landscapes, city scenes) and keep to 3–4 sentences maximum.

Example: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel. Photography is my main hobby, so I often photograph landscapes and city scenes. I also sometimes take portraits of myself and share the best shots on social media.

Suggestion: Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, plural forms), improve sentence structure, and add clear linking words. Be specific with vocabulary (streets, skyline, fresh air, countryside) and avoid short fragmented phrases. Keep answers to maximum five coherent sentences.

Example: It depends on my mood. When I want to feel energetic and see lots of variety, I prefer urban areas because the busy streets, bright lights, and colourful skyline energize me. However, when I need to relax and recharge, I choose the countryside because the fresh air and peaceful scenery help me unwind.

Suggestion: Make sentences grammatically correct and concise. State your position clearly, then give specific reasons with linking words (for example, but, however, because). Use correct possessive forms and avoid vague phrases like "something"; specify what you mean (new experiences, different culture).

Example: Mostly I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and comforting. However, sometimes I crave new experiences, so I enjoy visiting other countries for their lively streets, different cultures, and fresh perspectives.

× Yes, I love taking pictures of different views than at when I I travel.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views when I travel.

There is an extra word 'than' and a duplicated 'I'. The phrase 'when I travel' correctly uses the present simple to describe a habitual action. Remove 'than at' and the duplicate pronoun to fix sentence structure and verb use.

× Photography is my hobby so I often photography landscape and cities scenes and sometimes I take portraits of myself and post on social media.

✓ Photography is my hobby, so I often photograph landscapes and city scenes, and sometimes I take portraits of myself and post them on social media.

The verb 'photography' is incorrectly used as a verb; the correct verb is 'photograph'. 'Landscape' and 'city' need plural forms when speaking generally: 'landscapes' and 'city scenes'. Add commas to separate clauses and 'them' clarifies the object 'portraits' when saying 'post them on social media'.

× When I wants to feel energetic and see a lots of variety, I prefer urban area because the busy St. bright lights and colourful skylight gives me energy.

✓ When I want to feel energetic and see a lot of variety, I prefer urban areas because the busy streets, bright lights, and colorful skyline give me energy.

Use 'want' (first person singular) not 'wants' which is third person. 'A lot' is the correct quantifier. 'Urban areas' plural matches general preference. 'St.' should be expanded to 'streets' here and pluralized. 'Skylight' is incorrect for city views; 'skyline' is correct. Subject-verb agreement: plural subject 'streets, bright lights, and skyline' requires plural verb 'give'.

× But when I want to relax and recharge, I choose the peaceful field.

✓ But when I want to relax and recharge, I choose peaceful fields.

Use plural 'fields' when speaking generally. 'The peaceful field' implies a specific field; using plural better matches general preference.

× Quite air and natural scenario help me feel.

✓ Quiet air and natural scenery help me relax.

'Quite air' is incorrect; the intended adjective is 'quiet'. 'Natural scenario' should be 'natural scenery'. The verb phrase 'help me feel' is incomplete; specify 'relax' to convey the intended effect. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'scenery' is singular so 'helps' would be used, but with two nouns 'quiet air and natural scenery' the plural verb 'help' is correct.

× Mostly I prefer my own country's view because it is familiar to me, it is comforting to watch, but sometimes I crave for exploring something.

✓ Mostly I prefer my own country's views because they are familiar to me and comforting to see, but sometimes I crave exploring something new.

'View' should be plural 'views' for general statements; then use plural pronoun 'they'. 'Comforting to watch' is unnatural for scenery; 'comforting to see' fits better. Remove 'for' after 'crave'—'crave exploring' or 'crave to explore' are correct, and add 'new' to complete the idea.

× So I would choose another country's that busy streets and their new culture and their fresh air or a different.

✓ So I would choose another country for its busy streets, new culture, fresh air, or something different.

Sentence is ungrammatical: 'another country's that busy streets' should be 'another country for its busy streets'. Use possessive 'its' not 'their' when referring to 'another country'. End with 'something different' to complete the comparison. Maintain parallel structure listing features of the other country.