Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms (e.g. "difference" → "different"). Focus on why you like it and give an example.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they capture the beauty of a place. For example, when I visit a seaside town I photograph the sunrise to remember the colours and peaceful atmosphere.

Suggestion: Avoid saying you don't know. Give a direct preference and a brief reason using linking words (because / so). If unsure, say you like both and explain differences. Keep it to 1–2 sentences.

Example: I prefer rural views because I like wide-open spaces and natural scenery, such as fields and mountains. However, I also enjoy urban views for interesting architecture and city lights at night.

Suggestion: Give a clear, grammatical response: state your preference and give specific reasons. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and avoid vague phrases and repetition. Mention a concrete contrast between your country and other countries if relevant.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because I want to see different landscapes and cultures. For example, I would like to visit Japan to photograph cherry blossoms and Italy for its historic towns and coastlines.

× Yes, because taking a picture of difference view can the view is beautiful.

✓ Yes, because taking a picture of different views can show that the view is beautiful.

The sentence uses incorrect adjective form 'difference' instead of 'different' and misorders phrases causing confusion. Also 'view' should be plural 'views' to match general meaning. The modal-like construction 'can the view is beautiful' is ungrammatical; replace with 'can show that the view is beautiful' to express ability. Suggestion: use the adjective 'different', make the noun plural when speaking generally, and use a clear verb phrase like 'can show that'.

× I don't know what the answer, I'm sorry.

✓ I don't know the answer, I'm sorry.

The phrase 'what the answer' is incorrect word order and unnecessary 'what'. The correct collocation is 'know the answer'. Also the comma before 'I'm sorry' is acceptable as a pause but the main error is the extra 'what'. Suggestion: remove 'what' when using 'know the answer'.

× I prefer you in another country because I have to see many country are there in the world are so so pretty and so good with the and so good view actually in my country is so own.

✓ I prefer other countries because I want to see many countries in the world; they are very pretty and have beautiful views. My country is different.

The original contains multiple pronoun and noun errors: 'I prefer you in another country' misuses 'you' instead of 'other countries'. 'I have to see' is awkward for preference—use 'I want to see' or 'I'd like to see'. 'Many country are there' has plural agreement and word order errors; correct to 'many countries in the world'. Repeated filler words 'so so' should be 'very'. 'So good with the and so good view' is ungrammatical; simplify to 'have beautiful views'. The final clause 'actually in my country is so own' is unclear; 'my country is different' or 'my country is small' would be appropriate. Suggestions: use correct pronouns ('other countries'), match singular/plural, simplify sentence into clear clauses, and choose verbs that match intention ('prefer' + noun; 'want to see').