Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid contradictions (saying you love taking pictures but not keen on photography), and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Fix grammar (e.g., "I do to capture" → "I do it to capture").

Example: I do like taking pictures of different views. For example, when I travel I take photos to capture memorable landscapes and local scenes, so I can remember the trip later.

Suggestion: Clarify and correct grammar and word choice, use linking words, and give one specific reason or example. Replace unclear phrases ("come soothing") with correct adjectives and combine short fragments into coherent sentences.

Example: I prefer views in urban areas because they often combine interesting architecture with parks. For instance, I enjoy walking along tree-lined streets and riverside promenades to enjoy the fresh air and peaceful scenery.

Suggestion: Make a clear, direct statement, then give one or two specific supporting details connected with linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., "I have travel a lot" → "I have traveled to many places") and use correct plural forms and articles.

Example: I like views in both my own country and abroad. For example, I appreciate familiar landscapes at home, but I also travel to other countries to experience different cultures and unique traditions.

× Yes, I do love taking pictures occasionally.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures occasionally.

The auxiliary 'do' is unnecessary with 'love' in a simple affirmative present tense sentence. Use the simple present 'I love' for habitual actions or preferences. Suggestion: Omit 'do' in affirmative present statements: 'I love...'.

× I'm not that keen on photography but I do to capture a lot of moments when I'm travelling.

✓ I'm not that keen on photography but I do like to capture a lot of moments when I'm travelling.

The structure 'do to capture' is incorrect. After 'do' as a substitute verb, use a main verb (e.g., 'like') or directly use the infinitive 'to capture' without 'do'. Here 'do like to capture' or 'like to capture' is correct. Suggestion: Use 'I do like to capture' for emphasis or simply 'I like to capture.'

× For instance, beautiful landscape.

✓ For instance, a beautiful landscape.

This fragment lacks a verb and article. To be a complete noun phrase in this context, it needs an article ('a') and functions as an object of the previous statement. Suggestion: Make it a full phrase: 'For instance, a beautiful landscape.' or combine it with the previous sentence.

× I prefer views in urban areas because they have come soothing atmosphere and beautiful scenery.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because they have a calm, soothing atmosphere and beautiful scenery.

'Come' is a misspelling of 'calm'. Also, 'soothing atmosphere' should be modified with 'a' for countable concept and 'calm, soothing' is a natural adjective sequence. Suggestion: Use correct adjective spelling and include the article: 'a calm, soothing atmosphere.'

× I love going for walks there to enjoy fresh air, peaceful landscape.

✓ I love going for walks there to enjoy the fresh air and the peaceful landscape.

The list 'fresh air, peaceful landscape' lacks articles and conjunction. In English, 'fresh air' often takes 'the' in specific contexts and parallel nouns should include 'and' and appropriate articles. Suggestion: Use 'the fresh air and the peaceful landscape.'

× There's greenery so.

✓ There's greenery there.

'So' is not appropriate at the end; likely the student meant to indicate location. 'There's greenery there.' is a complete clause. Suggestion: Use 'there' or, if intending consequence, expand: 'So, I feel relaxed because there's greenery.'.

× I prefer both as I have travel a lot of places seem beautiful landscape in my country.

✓ I prefer both because I have travelled to a lot of places and many landscapes in my country seem beautiful.

Several errors: tense of 'have travelled' (present perfect) requires past participle 'travelled'; missing preposition 'to' after 'travelled'; run-on structure needs conjunction and plural 'landscapes'. Also word order adjusted for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'I have travelled to a lot of places, and many landscapes in my country seem beautiful.'

× I am eager to know about different country, their culture, their tradition, uniqueness.

✓ I am eager to learn about different countries, their cultures, traditions, and uniqueness.

Use plural 'countries' when referring to multiple nations; 'learn' is more natural than 'know about' here. Match plural nouns 'countries' with 'their' and use plural forms 'cultures' and 'traditions'. Also use parallel list structure separated by commas and 'and'. Suggestion: Say 'learn about different countries, their cultures, traditions, and unique features.'.