Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và rõ ràng trong câu trả lời: Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'taking picture' → 'taking pictures'), sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sắp xếp ý mạch lạc và ngắn gọn (không quá 3–4 câu). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về loại cảnh bạn thích và lý do để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn. Sử dụng từ nối đơn giản như 'for example', 'because' để liên kết ý.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different natural views. For example, when I come across a beautiful landscape, I often stop to take several photos because the light and colors make me feel happy. I keep these photos as a personal collection to remind me of places I’ve visited.

Suggestion: Cải thiện từ vựng chính xác và trật tự câu: Dùng từ phù hợp ('villes' not needed; use 'cities' or 'urban areas'), sửa thì và số (e.g., 'it made me' → 'they make me'), và tránh từ lặp. Nêu rõ lý do, so sánh ngắn giữa đô thị và nông thôn, dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'while' để rõ ràng hơn.

Example: I prefer views in urban areas because cities feel lively and energetic. For example, illuminated streets and tall buildings create a vibrant atmosphere at night, while rural areas are usually quieter and more peaceful.

Suggestion: Cải thiện tính mạch lạc và ý chính: Tránh câu lủng củng, sửa ngữ pháp và cấu trúc (ví dụ: 'I very pleaser' → 'I prefer'), và đưa lý do cụ thể vì sao thích cảnh trong nước (ví dụ: quen thuộc, gắn bó với văn hóa). Giữ câu ngắn, rõ ràng, dùng 2–3 câu có liên kết bằng 'because' hoặc 'so'.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to the landscapes and culture. For instance, familiar scenes like local mountains and festivals remind me of home and childhood memories.

× Yes I do. I really like taking picture of different really special natural views.

✓ Yes, I do. I really like taking pictures of different, very special natural views.

The noun 'picture' should be plural after 'taking' when referring to multiple items; use 'taking pictures'. Also 'really special' is awkwardly ordered; 'very special' is more natural and a comma improves clarity. Suggestions: use plural nouns after 'taking' when speaking about multiple photos and place modifiers ('very') before the adjective.

× If I example when I across the room landscape beauty I will take info taking some photo.

✓ For example, when I come across a beautiful landscape in the room, I will take some photos.

Sentence had incorrect connectors and word forms: 'If I example when I across' is ungrammatical. Replace with 'For example, when I come across'. 'landscape beauty' should be 'a beautiful landscape'. 'take info taking some photo' is incorrect; use 'take some photos'. Suggestions: use clear connectors ('For example, when'), correct verb phrase 'come across', and pluralize 'photos' when taking more than one.

× This make me so happy as collections of views.

✓ This makes me so happy as a collection of views.

Subject-verb agreement: 'This' (singular) requires 'makes' not 'make'. 'collections' should be singular 'a collection' to match meaning, and 'of views' clarifies the content. Suggestions: ensure verb agrees with subject number and choose singular/plural noun forms to match intended meaning.

× MMM in my opinion I prefer Ville in urban areas because it made me feel the light is coming as full of energy.

✓ Hmm, in my opinion I prefer city views in urban areas because they make me feel full of energy with all the lights.

Original mixes words and tenses: 'Ville' is incorrect (use 'city views'), 'it made me feel' uses past tense incorrectly; present simple 'make' is needed for general preference. 'the light is coming as full of energy' is unnatural; rephrase to 'they make me feel full of energy with all the lights.' Suggestions: use consistent present tense for general preferences, correct vocabulary ('city' not 'Ville'), and rephrase to natural English.

× For example building an light streets it makes the city is a lightened and gorgeous.

✓ For example, buildings and lit streets make the city look bright and gorgeous.

Articles and noun forms are incorrect: 'building an light streets' should be 'buildings and lit streets'. 'it makes the city is a lightened' is ungrammatical; use 'make the city look bright'. 'lightened' is awkward; 'bright' or 'well-lit' is better. Suggestions: use plural nouns for general statements, pair subjects correctly with verbs, and use appropriate adjectives ('well-lit', 'bright').

× Actually to say I very pleaser in our in the view our country because I feel like and will be like in their country in the future.

✓ Actually, to be honest, I am very pleased with the views in our country because I feel comfortable here and would like to live in my country in the future.

Many structural and word choice errors: 'to say I very pleaser' should be 'to be honest, I am very pleased'. 'in our in the view our country' is jumbled; use 'the views in our country'. 'I feel like and will be like in their country' is unclear; likely means 'I feel comfortable here and would like to live in my country in the future.' Suggestions: use clear phrases for opinions ('to be honest', 'I am pleased'), correct noun phrases ('the views in our country'), and express future desire with 'would like to' or 'will' appropriately.

× And So what I like is many.

✓ And there are many things I like about it.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and vague: 'And So what I like is many' should be expressed as 'And there are many things I like about it.' Suggestions: use 'there are' + plural noun to indicate many items and specify what 'it' refers to.