Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes, I do), avoid repetition, and add one specific reason with an example. Use linking words to connect ideas and limit to 2–4 short sentences.

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because they are often very aesthetic and evoke strong emotions. For example, I like taking photos of sunrise landscapes because the light and colors change quickly, which makes each picture unique.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference with a concise reason and avoid repetition and unclear words (e.g., "a lot of science"). Use a linking word (because/so) and a concrete detail about urban sights.

Example: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the energy and architecture of cities. For example, I like photographing skyscrapers and busy streets at night because the lights and reflections create dramatic scenes.

Suggestion: Answer directly and add one specific supporting detail with an example. Avoid repeating phrases and correct grammar (e.g., "my country", "nature"). Use a linking phrase to explain why you prefer it.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because Kazakhstan has diverse and beautiful natural landscapes. For example, I enjoy photographing the mountains and steppe near Almaty because the scenery is unique and well preserved.

× Yes, I like it and because I think different for taking pictures of different views are very aesthetic and taking taking pictures, taking photos with a really beautiful beautiful views and beautiful sights is really good.

✓ Yes, I like it because I think taking pictures of different views is very aesthetic, and taking photos of really beautiful views and sights is really enjoyable.

The student overuses 'taking' and misorders words. The phrase 'for taking pictures' is unnecessary and incorrect here; instead use the gerund 'taking pictures' as the subject. Use singular 'is' to agree with the singular gerund phrase 'taking pictures of different views'. Remove duplicate words ('taking taking', 'beautiful beautiful') and use 'enjoyable' instead of 'is really good' for naturalness. Suggestion: simplify to 'I like taking pictures of different views because I find them very aesthetic.' Grammar problem type ID:8

× Actually I prefer views in urban areas because in urban areas is very good good vibes and in urban areas I really like the lot of build, lots of buildings and and a lot of science.

✓ Actually, I prefer views in urban areas because they have a very good vibe, and I really like the many buildings and the modern atmosphere there.

The sentence misuses pronouns and has missing subjects ('in urban areas is very good good vibes' lacks a subject). 'Good vibes' should be singular 'vibe' or 'good vibes' with correct structure. 'The lot of build' is incorrect; use 'many buildings'. 'A lot of science' is unclear; 'modern atmosphere' or 'technology' fits better. Suggestion: include a clear subject and use correct quantifiers: 'they have a very good vibe' or 'urban areas have good vibes.' Grammar problem type ID:12

× I prefer views in my own country because Kazakhstan has a lot of good views and really pretty nature and the cities are clean and the natures are amazing so I love I prefer more.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because Kazakhstan has many beautiful landscapes and nature, the cities are clean, and the natural areas are amazing, so I prefer it.

Errors with singular/plural and word choice: 'a lot of good views' is acceptable but 'many beautiful landscapes' is more natural. 'Really pretty nature' is awkward; 'beautiful nature' or 'natural areas' is better. 'The natures' is incorrect pluralization of 'nature' (uncountable). Also streamline repetition ('I love I prefer more') into one phrase: 'so I prefer it.' Suggestion: use uncountable 'nature' or countable 'natural areas/landscapes' and avoid repeating the verb. Grammar problem type ID:1

× I prefer views from my countries and others.

✓ I prefer views from my country more than from other countries.

'My countries' is incorrect and the comparative idea is unclear. Use singular 'my country' for the speaker's own country and structure the comparison explicitly: '...more than from other countries.' Suggestion: express preference clearly with 'prefer... to' or 'prefer... more than.' Grammar problem type ID:26