Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve clarity and grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use correct articles and verb forms, and add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words to connect ideas. Limit to 3–4 concise sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I visit forests. I usually use my DSLR to capture sunlight filtering through the trees because the light creates dramatic contrasts. After editing, I often share the best shots on social media to get feedback from friends.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a topic sentence, correct noun forms and prepositions, and add a specific reason. Use one linking phrase and avoid repeating words like 'everywhere'. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I find the countryside more peaceful. For example, villages are often covered with green fields and fresh air, which helps me relax and enjoy nature.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear preference statement, fix word order and article usage, and provide one concrete example. Use linking words like 'for example' and keep sentences concise and grammatically correct.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because it has many beautiful natural sites. For example, there are large mountain forests and several rivers where I can relax and enjoy the scenery.

× Actually I am keen on taking picture taking different views especially when I am on the forest.

✓ Actually I am keen on taking pictures of different views, especially when I am in the forest.

Use the gerund 'taking' correctly with the plural 'pictures' (singular/plural issue) and the preposition 'of' after 'pictures'. Also use the preposition 'in' with 'forest'. Suggestion: say 'keen on taking pictures of different views' and use 'in the forest' for location.

× I use my camera to take photos and especially the sunlight and then I later I share the photos to the in the social media.

✓ I use my camera to take photos, especially of the sunlight, and later I share the photos on social media.

Remove the extra 'the' before 'sunlight' and use 'of' to indicate the object being photographed. Use 'later' without repeating 'I' and the correct preposition for platforms is 'on social media' not 'to the in the social media'. Suggestion: 'especially of the sunlight' and 'share the photos on social media.'

× Actually I prefer Village view because it is very interesting and there everywhere is covered with grass and everywhere is fresh.

✓ Actually I prefer village views because they are very interesting; everywhere is covered with grass and the air is fresh.

Use plural 'views' for a general preference (singular/plural issue) and lowercase 'village'. Replace vague 'it is' with 'they are' to agree with plural. Use 'the air is fresh' for natural description. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general categories and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Actually I prefer my own country because there are a lot of sites interesting sightseeing in my country, especially in the big forests at mountains and several some there are some rivers to relax on it.

✓ Actually I prefer my own country because there are a lot of interesting sightseeing sites, especially in the large mountain forests, and there are some rivers to relax by.

Fix word order 'interesting sightseeing sites' and remove redundant phrases like 'several some there are some'. Use 'large mountain forests' for natural adjective order and the preposition 'by' or 'beside' with 'relax' rather than 'on it'. Suggestion: say 'interesting sightseeing sites' and 'rivers to relax by' and avoid redundant words.