Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence, reduce repetition, correct grammar, and add one or two specific reasons or examples. Keep it concise (no more than 5 sentences) and use linking words like 'because' or 'and' for coherence.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography captures the unique beauty of nature. For example, a sunset over the sea can make me reflect on the day, and photographing it helps me remember the colors and mood.

Suggestion: Start with a direct statement of preference, fix grammar (use gerund/noun forms), and give specific reasons or examples. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example' to organize the answer.

Example: I prefer photographing rural areas because they offer natural landscapes like mountains and clear streams. For example, I enjoy taking pictures of grazing animals and quiet valleys that you rarely see in cities.

Suggestion: Answer directly (state preference), avoid filler words, correct grammar, and provide one clear reason with a concrete example comparing your country and others. Keep it within five sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'however'.

Example: I prefer photographing views in my own country because it has diverse landscapes and unique local scenes. For instance, different regions offer mountains, coastal areas, and traditional villages that I know well and can capture more meaningfully.

× Yes, definitely taking picture of different view can you can capture a different beauty if the natures and that were that will make you think a lot of things and with your different mindset.

✓ Yes, definitely; taking pictures of different views can capture different kinds of beauty in nature and can make you think about many things with a different mindset.

The sentence incorrectly uses the base verb forms and singular nouns where plural or -ing forms are needed. 'Taking picture' should be 'taking pictures' (plural) and 'different view' should be 'different views'. Also, the original has redundant/modal errors ('can you can') and awkward phrasing. Using 'taking pictures' (gerund phrase) correctly functions as the subject, followed by 'can capture' (modal + base verb). Suggestions: use plural nouns to match general meaning, remove duplicated modals, and restructure the clause for clarity.

× I prefer to photographing rural area because theaters there are many of the nature landscape like mountain clear waters and there are guilty animals you can capture photographed land.

✓ I prefer photographing rural areas because there are many natural landscapes there, like mountains and clear waters, and wild animals you can photograph.

Errors include incorrect preposition/infinitive 'to photographing' (should be the gerund 'photographing' or 'to photograph'), singular/plural mismatches 'rural area' vs 'rural areas', and wrong words 'theaters' and 'guilty animals'. 'There are' should precede plural noun 'many natural landscapes'. 'Wild animals' is the correct term. Also 'capture photographed land' is unclear; use 'you can photograph'. Suggestions: use 'photographing' as gerund after 'prefer', match plural nouns, and choose correct vocabulary ('natural', 'mountains', 'wild animals').

× That's a very hard question to answer, but normally I like pro pre, uh, to photographing my, the view of my country because my country is very, uh, we have a, a lot of, uh, country territory and they have a different view in their geography from their.

✓ That's a very hard question to answer, but normally I prefer photographing the views of my country because it has a large territory and diverse geography.

The phrase 'to photographing' is incorrect; after 'prefer' use the gerund 'photographing' or the structure 'prefer to photograph'. The sentence also contains disfluent fragments ('pro pre, uh') and incorrect pronoun/number usage ('my, the view', 'they have'). 'My country is very, we have a lot of country territory' is ungrammatical; replace with 'it has a large territory and diverse geography'. Suggestions: use 'prefer photographing' or 'prefer to photograph', remove fillers, and simplify to clear noun phrases with correct pronouns and adjectives.