Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar and fluency by using correct verb forms and articles, make the response more natural and concise, and add one specific reason or example. Use a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details linked with a connector.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I love photography, so exploring varied scenes helps me experiment with composition and lighting, and it makes me feel creative. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset to capture contrasting colors.

Suggestion: Make the structure clearer: start with a direct topic sentence, then give specific supporting details with correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid vague or unclear phrases (e.g. 'UMM lands eastland', 'people are original'). Use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: I prefer rural views because they offer natural landscapes and a peaceful atmosphere. For instance, you can see mountains and rolling hills, wide farms and unspoilt fields, and the lifestyle of local villagers is calmer than in cities.

Suggestion: Be concise and use natural expressions: state your preference, give a clear reason, and provide one specific example. Replace awkward phrases like 'new recovery' and correct repetition and article use.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new scenery and cultural experiences. For example, visiting Japan allowed me to photograph traditional temples and modern cityscapes, which was very different from the landscapes at home.

× Yes, I like taking picture with different views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match the general activity of taking multiple photos. Also use preposition 'of' with 'views' to show what the pictures are of. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general activities (taking pictures, making photographs).

× I like photography in general, so taking picture in different views make me feel as a model.

✓ I like photography in general, so taking pictures of different views makes me feel like a model.

Two issues: 'taking picture' should be 'taking pictures' (plural) and the verb after the gerund phrase must agree with singular subject 'taking pictures', so use 'makes' (present tense third-person singular). Also use 'like a model' rather than 'as a model' for this context. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement after gerund phrases and choose correct preposition ('like').

× I prefer views in rural areas because in rural areas we can see mountain, can see hills, we can see UMM lands eastland and the people are original.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because in rural areas we can see mountains, hills, UMM lands (Eastland), and the people are indigenous.

Countable nouns 'mountain' and 'hill' need plural forms when speaking generally: 'mountains' and 'hills'. 'The people are original' is awkward; 'indigenous' or 'local' is more natural. Proper nouns like 'Eastland' should be capitalized and clarified. Suggestion: use plural forms for general lists and choose clear adjectives for people ('indigenous' or 'local').

× The area is clean, soft and peaceful.

✓ The area is clean, calm, and peaceful.

The adjective 'soft' is not natural to describe an area; use 'calm' or 'quiet'. Also include serial comma for clarity. Suggestion: choose adjectives that commonly describe environments (clean, calm, peaceful).

× I prefer views in other countries because in my country I have already seen some views.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because in my country I have already seen many of the views.

'Some views' is acceptable but 'many of the views' is clearer when contrasting familiar vs. new places. Ensure agreement between determiner and noun. Suggestion: use quantifiers that express amount clearly (many, several).

× So it will be a new recovery for me to see views in another country, to visit another country and to enjoy the the cultures and all the thing around it.

✓ So it would be a new experience for me to see views in another country, to visit a new place, and to enjoy the cultures and everything around them.

Multiple issues: 'new recovery' is incorrect; 'new experience' fits intended meaning. Repetition 'another country' was awkward; 'a new place' avoids repetition. 'the the cultures' has a double 'the' and 'all the thing around it' should be 'everything around them' (plural 'cultures' -> 'them'). Also conditional 'would' is more natural when expressing preference. Suggestion: use idiomatic phrases ('new experience'), avoid repetition, fix article errors and pronoun agreement.