Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammatical accuracy, verb forms and sentence structure; be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms (e.g., 'I photograph' -> 'I take photos' or 'I photograph'), and avoid redundancy. Add one or two specific supporting details linked with a connector (e.g., 'for example' or 'so') and keep to under five sentences.

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. When I travel, I usually take landscape photos because I like capturing natural light and colors. For example, last month I photographed a coastal sunset and shared it with friends on social media to keep the memory.

Suggestion: Give a direct preference or a balanced answer with clear structure and correct grammar. Use linking words correctly ('however', 'on the other hand') and provide specific contrasts (e.g., nature, tranquility vs architecture, vibrancy). Avoid hesitations and plural/singular errors.

Example: I like both, but if I had to choose I would prefer rural views for their tranquility and natural landscapes. However, city skylines are impressive because of the architecture and lights, so I enjoy urban views when I visit a new city.

Suggestion: Be concise and correct grammar: use present perfect ('I haven't had a chance') and avoid unclear phrases ('age plays'). Provide a clear response: say you prefer your country for now or you cannot compare, then give a reason and a specific example of a local view you like. Keep it under five sentences.

Example: I haven't had the chance to visit other countries, so I can't really compare yet. For now I prefer views in my own country because I know the landscapes and culture well; for example, I often visit a nearby mountain that has beautiful hiking trails and panoramic vistas.

× Whenever I travel, I photographs of landscapes.

✓ Whenever I travel, I photograph landscapes.

Original uses 'photographs' which is a noun or third-person singular verb; with subject I the correct verb is 'photograph' (base form). Use simple present 'I photograph' for habitual action. Suggestion: use subject-verb agreement: I + base verb (photograph).

× Moreover, I uploaded them on social media with my friends because it contained memories.

✓ Moreover, I upload them to social media with my friends because they contain memories.

The student mixed past tense 'uploaded' with present meaning and used 'it' singular for plural 'pictures'. To talk generally/habitually, use present simple 'upload' and plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'contain'. Also use preposition 'to' with 'upload to social media'.

× To be honest, I will not compare because both plays and significant role, uh, with their different beautiful places.

✓ To be honest, I cannot compare because both play a significant role with their different beautiful places.

Use present ability 'cannot' instead of future 'will not' for general statement. 'Plays' as a verb must agree with plural subject 'both' so use 'play'. 'and significant role' needs article 'a' -> 'a significant role'. Suggestion: use 'cannot compare' and ensure subject-verb agreement and articles.

× But if I would like to talk about a rural places, it contains landscapes and natural view and moreover, city contains skyline, dramatic skyline.

✓ But if I talk about rural places, they have landscapes and natural views; moreover, cities have dramatic skylines.

'If I would like to talk' is incorrect in this conditional; use 'if I talk' or 'if I were to talk'. 'A rural places' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a'. Use plural agreement: 'they have' and plural 'views'. 'City contains skyline' should be 'cities have dramatic skylines' for general comparison. Maintain parallel plural forms and correct noun forms.

× To be honest, I haven't get a chance to uh to explore another country, so I can't compare because age plays have its unique beauty.

✓ To be honest, I haven't had a chance to explore another country, so I can't compare because each age/place has its unique beauty.

Present perfect requires past participle 'had' after 'haven't'. 'Get' should be 'had'. The clause 'age plays have its unique beauty' is unclear and ungrammatical: likely meant 'each place has its unique beauty' or 'every age/place has its unique beauty'. Ensure noun agreement 'its' matches singular 'place' or use 'their' with plural. I replaced with 'each age/place' to match possible intent.

× But if I would like to talk about my place, I haven't explored many places but I want to because it contains many beautiful views.

✓ But if I talk about my country, I haven't explored many places yet, but I want to because it has many beautiful views.

Use 'if I talk' instead of 'if I would like to talk' for this conditional. 'My place' is vague; 'my country' is clearer. 'I haven't explored many places but I want to' needs 'yet' to indicate intention. 'It contains many beautiful views' — 'it' referring to country is fine but 'has' is more natural than 'contains'. Ensure tense consistency and clearer noun reference.