School— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Where is your school?
Candidate
My school is Scotching University, it's in Incheon in Korea and I'm a first year student in my university. My major is emergency department, so I'll learn about many medical knowledge. Yeah.
Examiner
Do you like your school?
Candidate
Yes, to be honest I like my major more than school because I want to know about medical knowledge and skills. My MA major have this.
Examiner
Do you think your school is a good place to study?
Candidate
It's because our university is separated to campus. One campus is global campus and others medical campus. I I mean medical campus. Medical campus have many medical majors so we can.
Examiner
What is the environment like at your school?
Candidate
Our school's environment is go forward to study medical knowledges and our buildings. To be honest, our buildings was planned a hospital build build building hospital. So it's very.
Examiner
How important is interest in study?
Candidate
Uh, in my opinion, it's very important to students, uh, because interest makes students more study there by themselves. So I think trust is one of the important thing of studying, Yeah.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Where is your school?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 답변이 다소 장황하고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 자연스러운 영어 표현과 간결한 문장 구성을 연습하세요. 예를 들어, 학교 위치와 전공을 명확히 구분하여 말하는 것이 좋습니다.
Example: My school is Scotching University, located in Incheon, Korea. I am a first-year student majoring in Emergency Medicine, where I will learn various medical skills.
Do you like your school?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 학교와 전공에 대한 감정을 분명히 표현하고, 문장을 완성도 있게 구성하세요.
Example: Yes, I like my major more than the school itself because I am passionate about learning medical knowledge and skills.
Do you think your school is a good place to study?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 답변이 불완전하고 문법적 오류가 많습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 이유를 명확하게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.
Example: Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because it has separate campuses, including a medical campus with many specialized majors.
What is the environment like at your school?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 답변이 불명확하고 문법 오류가 많아 이해하기 어렵습니다. 학교 환경에 대해 구체적이고 명확한 설명을 연습하세요.
Example: The environment at my school is focused on medical studies. Our buildings are designed like a hospital, which helps students get used to a real medical setting.
How important is interest in study?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 답변이 중복되고 문법적으로 부자연스럽습니다. 관심의 중요성을 명확하고 간결하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.
Example: In my opinion, interest is very important for studying because it motivates students to learn independently and enjoy the process.
Grammar
× My MA major have this.
✓ My major has this.
The subject 'major' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.
× Medical campus have many medical majors so we can.
✓ The medical campus has many medical majors so we can.
The subject 'Medical campus' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. This is a singular and plural agreement error.
× Our school's environment is go forward to study medical knowledges and our buildings.
✓ Our school's environment is focused on studying medical knowledge and our buildings.
'Knowledges' is incorrect because 'knowledge' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Also, the phrase 'is go forward to study' is incorrect and has been corrected to 'is focused on studying' for clarity and grammatical correctness.
× our buildings was planned a hospital build build building hospital.
✓ Our buildings were planned as hospital buildings.
The subject 'buildings' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' instead of 'was'. Also, the phrase was unclear and has been corrected to a proper expression.
× interest makes students more study there by themselves.
✓ interest makes students study more by themselves.
The phrase 'more study' is incorrect; the correct form is 'study more'. The quantifier 'more' should modify the verb 'study' properly.
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