School— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa rõ ràng và thiếu thông tin cụ thể. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp vị trí của trường và cung cấp thêm chi tiết để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Example: My school is located in the capital city of my province, which is a small but vibrant place.

Suggestion: Bạn đã mắc lỗi phát âm và sử dụng từ không phù hợp ('scone' thay vì 'school'). Câu trả lời cũng không rõ ràng và thiếu chi tiết. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích lý do bạn thích trường.

Example: Yes, I like my school because it has a friendly atmosphere and excellent teachers.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa mạch lạc và thiếu liên kết. Bạn nên sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể.

Example: I think my school is a good place to study because it offers many subjects, and moreover, there are interesting extracurricular activities.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác ('scone' thay vì 'scene' hoặc 'campus'). Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, sửa lỗi và thêm từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Example: The environment at my school is very good because there are many friendly friends, enthusiastic teachers, and a beautiful green campus with a playground.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng ngữ pháp chưa chính xác ('futures' nên là 'future'). Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời với lý do cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I'm really interested in studying because it influences my future and helps me achieve my dreams.

× My school is a hometown of a province.

✓ My school is in the hometown of a province.

The original sentence lacks the preposition 'in' to correctly indicate location. 'There be issue' refers to incorrect use or omission of 'there is/are' or related structures. Here, the sentence needs 'in' to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, I like my scone because it's very special, everything.

✓ Yes, I like my school because it's very special in every way.

The word 'scone' is incorrect; it should be 'school'. Also, 'everything' is not used properly here. The sentence needs a clearer expression, such as 'in every way', to convey the intended meaning.

× I think my school is a good place to study with many subjects. Another point the school is place where interesting activities.

✓ I think my school is a good place to study because it offers many subjects. Another point is that the school is a place where interesting activities happen.

The original sentences have structural issues and missing verbs. The first sentence needs a clearer connection ('because it offers many subjects'). The second sentence lacks a verb and proper connectors, making it incomplete and unclear.

× The environment like a very good because there are many friend, enthusiastic teacher and beautiful and and green scone and playground.

✓ The environment is very good because there are many friends, enthusiastic teachers, and a beautiful and green school and playground.

The sentence uses 'like' incorrectly instead of 'is'. Also, singular nouns 'friend' and 'teacher' should be plural. 'Scone' is a misspelling of 'school'. The sentence also has repeated 'and' and missing articles.

× I'm really interested in studying because it's had an influence on my futures and the dream I want.

✓ I'm really interested in studying because it has an influence on my future and the dream I want.

The phrase 'it's had' incorrectly uses past tense 'had' with 'it is'. The correct present perfect form is 'it has had' or simply present 'it has'. Also, 'futures' should be singular 'future'.