School— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınızda cümle yapısı ve kelime seçimi açısından daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarları azaltarak cevabınızı daha etkili hale getirebilirsiniz.

Example: My school is located in my city, close to my house. The road to school is short, so it only takes me about 10 minutes to get there in the morning since there is usually no traffic.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda daha net ve doğru kelimeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve anlamlı yaparak, gereksiz dolgu kelimelerinden kaçınmalısınız.

Example: Yes, I like my school because it offers many extracurricular activities. However, sometimes I feel bored since I don't have close friends in my class, but I still enjoy going there.

Suggestion: Cümlelerinizi daha düzgün ve akıcı hale getirmek için gereksiz duraklamalardan ve tekrar eden kelimelerden kaçının. Ayrıca, daha spesifik detaylar vererek cevabınızı zenginleştirin.

Example: Yes, I believe my school is a good place to study because it is prestigious in Turkey and offers many opportunities that help us perform better than students from other schools.

Suggestion: Cevabınızı daha düzenli ve mantıklı bir şekilde yapılandırmalısınız. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrar ve dolgu kelimelerinden kaçınarak daha spesifik ve açıklayıcı olun.

Example: My school has a lot of trees and two big gardens, one at the front and one at the back. There are also volleyball nets, and overall, the school campus is very spacious.

Suggestion: Cümlelerinizi daha akıcı ve doğal hale getirmek için dolgu kelimelerini azaltın. Ayrıca, fikirlerinizi daha açık ve mantıklı bir şekilde ifade edin.

Example: Interest in studying is very important because if you don't like a subject, you may feel bored and want to skip it. For example, I love biology, but I dislike physics, so I find it hard to study physics.

× My school is in my, my school is in my city, my house and my schools. Rd. is not so long because of it.

✓ My school is in my city, near my house and my school road is not so long because of that.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'in my' without specifying the location and misuses 'because of it' to explain the road length. The preposition 'in' should be followed by a specific place, and 'because of that' is more appropriate to refer to the previous statement. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I arrived like 10 minutes because no traffic in the mornings.

✓ I arrive in about 10 minutes because there is no traffic in the mornings.

The verb 'arrived' is in past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'arrive' is correct. Also, 'like 10 minutes' is informal; 'in about 10 minutes' is more appropriate. 'Because no traffic' lacks a verb; 'because there is no traffic' is correct.

× Actually yes because my skulls have lateral activities and it's like a umm really umm feel like your size schools umm.

✓ Actually, yes, because my school has extracurricular activities and it really feels like a school your size.

'Skulls' is a mispronunciation of 'school'. 'Lateral activities' should be 'extracurricular activities'. The sentence structure is unclear; it is corrected for clarity and proper pronoun use.

× I love it but sometimes I'm so bored because I don't have a friends close friend in my class because of it.

✓ I love it, but sometimes I'm bored because I don't have a close friend in my class.

'A friends close friend' is incorrect; it should be 'a close friend'. 'Because of it' is unnecessary and confusing here. The sentence is simplified for clarity.

× I always go.

✓ I always go to school.

The sentence 'I always go.' is incomplete and lacks an object. Adding 'to school' clarifies the meaning.

× I think yes, because my school is really prestigious, umm school in the Turkey, uh, my schools have a lot of opportunities and it's makes our UMM better than the other schools.

✓ I think yes, because my school is really prestigious in Turkey. My school has a lot of opportunities and it makes us better than other schools.

'School in the Turkey' should be 'school in Turkey' without 'the'. 'My schools' should be 'my school' as singular. 'It's makes' is incorrect; should be 'it makes'. 'Our UMM' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation; replaced with 'us'. Sentence is corrected for grammar and clarity.

× Like a lot of trees in my school umm have a lot of bangs in volleyball net umm My school have really big umm garden except 2 garden one of them is back to school, one of them is in front of the school umm and my school is so big.

✓ There are a lot of trees in my school. We have a volleyball net. My school has a really big garden except for two gardens; one is at the back of the school and one is in front of the school. My school is very big.

The original sentence has multiple preposition errors: 'bangs in volleyball net' is unclear and corrected to 'volleyball net'. 'Except 2 garden' should be 'except for two gardens'. 'Back to school' should be 'at the back of the school'. 'My school have' should be 'My school has' (subject-verb agreement). The sentence is split for clarity.

× My school have really big umm garden except 2 garden one of them is back to school, one of them is in front of the school umm and my school is so big.

✓ My school has a really big garden except for two gardens; one is at the back of the school and one is in front of the school. My school is very big.

'My school have' is incorrect; the singular subject 'school' requires 'has'. 'Except 2 garden' should be 'except for two gardens'. Prepositions are corrected for proper usage.

× A lot because umm, if you don't like the like lesson, you don't want to study of them because you're bored and umm, you want to skip it but you have to do it.

✓ A lot, because if you don't like a lesson, you don't want to study it because you're bored, and you want to skip it, but you have to do it.

'The like lesson' is incorrect; should be 'a lesson'. 'Study of them' is incorrect; should be 'study it'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× Like I love biology, but I hate physics and I don't want to study physics.

✓ For example, I love biology, but I hate physics and I don't want to study physics.

Starting a sentence with 'Like' as a filler is informal; 'For example' is more appropriate. The rest of the sentence is grammatically correct.