Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using correct verb forms and linking words. Avoid repetition and irrelevant remarks. Focus on simple past tense when talking about childhood, and use concise sentences (no more than 4–5).

Example: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I wanted one in secondary school because many classmates rode bikes to school, and I enjoyed watching them. However, my family couldn’t afford one at the time, so I never owned one.

Suggestion: Give a direct percentage or general statement, then explain with one or two clear, specific reasons. Use correct noun forms, avoid repetition, and use linking words (for example, because, however, for instance). Keep sentences concise and grammatical.

Example: I would say bikes are about 30% popular in my country because many people use them for short daily trips and some companies provide bikes for deliveries. For example, bicycle couriers are common in city centers, but most commuters prefer motorcycles or cars for longer journeys.

× No, I don't be back when I was young, but I was willing to have one when I was in my secondary school.

✓ No, I didn't have one when I was young, but I wanted to have one when I was in secondary school.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't be' with past context 'when I was young'. Use past simple 'didn't have' to match the time reference. Also 'was willing to have' is awkward; 'wanted to have' is the correct past-tense collocation for desire. Remove the article 'my' before 'secondary school' unless specific school is meant.

× Seeing a lot of children like riding bicycle and falling down on on it.

✓ I used to see a lot of children riding bicycles and falling off them.

The original lacks a clear subject and uses 'seeing' incorrectly; use 'I used to see' or 'I saw' for habitual past action. 'Like riding bicycle' should be 'riding bicycles' (plural) and 'falling down on on it' is incorrect preposition and repeated word; use 'falling off them'. Also add plural 'bicycles' and correct pronoun 'them'.

× It's a joy to watch.

✓ It was a joy to watch.

Because the speaker refers to past events ('when I was young'), the adjective phrase should be in past tense context: 'It was a joy to watch.' The structure 'It is' mismatches the past time frame.

× But I wish I had one when I was young.

✓ But I wish I had had one when I was young.

Expressing regret about a past unreal situation requires the past perfect in the if-clause or wished situation: 'I wish I had had one' (past perfect) to show the wish refers to an earlier time than the past reference point.

× Prefer I prefer it then than now.

✓ I preferred it then more than I do now.

The original repeats 'prefer' and misorders words. Use 'I preferred it then' or 'I would have preferred it then more than now.' To compare past and present, say 'more than I do now.' This fixes word order and repetition.

× On a scale of 100%, I would say bike are popular are popular 30% in my country because it is used for data day-to-day to day activities in some in some companies and some do use it for as medium of transport, transportation to work.

✓ On a scale of 100%, I would say bicycles are about 30% popular in my country because they are used for day-to-day activities in some companies, and some people use them as a means of transportation to work.

Multiple issues: 'bike' should be plural 'bicycles' to match '30%'; subject-verb agreement requires 'bicycles are'. Remove repeated phrase 'are popular are popular'. 'Used for data day-to-day to day activities' is incorrect; use 'used for day-to-day activities'. 'Some do use it for as medium of transport, transportation' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'some people use them as a means of transportation'. Also ensure pronoun agreement 'they'/'them' with plural 'bicycles'.

× So I could say it is a bit popular in my country.

✓ So I would say it is a bit popular in my country.

Given the speaker is giving an opinion based on estimation ('On a scale... I would say'), maintain conditional 'would' rather than simple present 'could'/'is'. Either 'I would say it is a bit popular' or 'I could say it is a bit popular' but 'would' fits the earlier phrasing and modal consistency.