Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và sự tự nhiên của câu trả lời bằng cách sử dụng thì đúng (ví dụ: 'It was' thay vì 'It's was'), tránh từ vựng không cần thiết như 'vehicle' nếu nói về xe đạp, và thêm một câu bổ sung ngắn gọn để giải thích lý do. Sử dụng tối đa 3-4 câu, có câu chủ đề rõ ràng và chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: nơi bạn thường đạp xe hoặc với ai).

Example: Yes, I did. It was my favourite when I was a child because I used to ride it to the park near my home every weekend with my friends. Riding a bike felt free and fun, and I often raced with my neighbour.

Suggestion: Cải thiện ngữ pháp, ngắt câu và mạch lạc: tránh tiếng tạm (uh) và cấu trúc câu bị lộn. Trình bày ý chính rõ ràng, sau đó dùng 1-2 câu bổ trợ với liên từ phù hợp (for example, because, moreover). Cung cấp thông tin cụ thể hơn (ai sử dụng xe đạp và ở đâu).

Example: Yes, I think bikes are still quite popular in Vietnam, especially among students and people in smaller towns. They are cheaper to buy and maintain than motorbikes, and moreover they are easier to park and manoeuvre in crowded streets.

× Yes I did. It's was my favorite vehicle in my childhood.

✓ Yes I did. It was my favorite vehicle in my childhood.

The error is the extra auxiliary 'is' before 'was'. Use simple past 'It was' to match 'When you were a child' and the preceding 'Yes I did'. Remove the incorrect 'is'. Suggestion: say 'It was my favorite vehicle when I was a child.' for more natural phrasing.

× Uh, many commuter in Vietnam prefer bicycle to travel and so.

✓ Uh, many commuters in Vietnam prefer bicycles for travel.

Use plural 'commuters' to match 'many' and plural 'bicycles' to match 'commuters' generally. Also use the preposition 'for' with 'travel' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: 'Many commuters in Vietnam prefer bicycles for travel.'

× And is this convenient and cheaper than motorbike moreover?

✓ And are they more convenient and cheaper than motorbikes?

The original mixes question form and demonstratives incorrectly. Use plural 'they' referring to 'bikes' and plural 'motorbikes'. Use comparative 'more convenient' and 'cheaper' together with auxiliary 'are' for present simple question. Suggestion: 'Are they more convenient and cheaper than motorbikes?'.

× And is it easier to park and maneuver?

✓ And is it easier to park and maneuver them?

Pronoun reference is unclear: use 'them' to refer back to 'bikes'. Keep auxiliary 'is' only if referring to 'it' (singular); since talking about bikes (plural) use 'is' with singular noun or change to 'are they' as earlier. Suggestion: 'And is it easier to park and maneuver?' can be improved to 'And is it easier to park and maneuver a bicycle?' or 'And is it easier to park and maneuver them?'.'