Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and articles (e.g., “when I was five”), avoid fillers like “like” and “yeah,” and limit to 3–4 sentences. Add one specific detail (e.g., where you rode or a memory) using a linking word (e.g., “also” or “for example”).

Example: Yes, I did. I received a bicycle when I was five, and it was my favourite toy. I used it for morning exercise and also to ride around the neighbourhood with my friends. For example, we would cycle to the park every Saturday.

Suggestion: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Begin with a direct statement, correct subject-verb agreement (“they are”), and reorganise ideas with linking words (e.g., “however,” “also”). Provide a specific reason or example for popularity (e.g., bike lanes, culture, events) and avoid vague phrases like “a bunch of by community.” Keep to 2–3 clear sentences.

Example: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many cities have dedicated bike lanes and a strong cycling culture. Also, there are active cycling communities that organise weekend rides, which encourages more people to use bikes for exercise and commuting.

× I got a bicycle when I was like a five years old and it was one of the best bicycle I've ever had.

✓ I got a bicycle when I was about five years old and it was one of the best bicycles I've ever had.

Two errors: incorrect expression 'a five years old' and singular/plural for 'bicycle'. Use 'about five years old' or 'around five years old' for age expressions (no article before the age phrase). Also 'one of the best bicycles' requires plural 'bicycles' after 'one of the'. The tense 'got' and present perfect 'I've ever had' are acceptable together because 'got' is a past event and present perfect compares overall experience up to now.

× I often use it for morning exercise and to ride around with my friends and also like with my family.

✓ I often use it for morning exercise and to ride around with my friends and also with my family.

Redundant or incorrect filler 'like' is unnecessary and informal here; remove it. The verbs 'use' and 'ride' are present habitual, which fits 'often'. Ensure parallel structure: 'for morning exercise and to ride' is acceptable though you could also use 'to exercise in the morning and to ride'. Keep consistent infinitive forms.

× Yes I do but are very popular in here.

✓ Yes, I do, but they are very popular here.

Missing subject 'they' causes subject-verb agreement and sentence structure problem. 'Are' needs a plural subject. Also 'in here' is nonstandard; use 'here'. Include commas for clarity. The speaker likely refers to 'bikes', so 'they are' is correct.

× There are also a bunch of by community that there is still active up until now people.

✓ There are also a bunch of community bike groups that are still active up to now.

The original sentence has multiple word order and article problems. 'By community' is incorrect; likely intended 'community bike groups' or 'community groups'. 'That there is still active' mixes structures; use 'that are still active' for plural groups. 'Up until now' is fine but 'up to now' is more natural here. Rearranged for clear noun phrase.

× There are a lot of people really loves to ride their bike here.

✓ There are a lot of people who really love to ride their bikes here.

Subject-verb agreement: 'people' is plural so the verb should be 'love' not 'loves'. Missing relative pronoun 'who' improves sentence flow. Use 'their bikes' (plural) to match 'people' or keep 'their bike' informally, but plural is clearer. Maintains present habit tense.