T-shirt— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating 'T-shirts' unnecessarily and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you could say when and why you wear them in one sentence.

Example: I usually wear T-shirts in summer because they are comfortable and help me feel relaxed.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but is a bit repetitive and could be more fluent. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'online apps' and use linking words to organise your points logically. Also, watch for grammar and word order.

Example: Yes, I often buy T-shirts online because it's convenient, offers a wide range of colours, and usually has free delivery.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Try to use linking words to explain reasons clearly and check your sentence structure. Also, avoid vague expressions like 'lost their traditional'.

Example: Older people in my country usually prefer traditional clothes because they believe wearing T-shirts might make them lose their cultural identity.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid awkward phrases like 'I wanted to playground'.

Example: Yes, I used to wear T-shirts as a kid because they were comfortable and allowed me to play easily outside.

× I buy T-shirts from online apps because I think it is very convenient and easy way to buy T-shirts in online apps and all colors are easy available and there is no delivery charges.

✓ I buy T-shirts on online apps because I think it is a very convenient and easy way to buy T-shirts on online apps, all colors are easily available, and there are no delivery charges.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect when referring to purchasing via apps; 'on' is the correct preposition. Also, 'in online apps' should be 'on online apps' to indicate the platform. Additionally, 'easy way' needs the article 'a' before it, 'easy available' should be 'easily available' (adverb form), and 'there is no delivery charges' should be 'there are no delivery charges' to agree in number.

× all colors are easy available and there is no delivery charges.

✓ all colors are easily available and there are no delivery charges.

The phrase 'easy available' is incorrect; it should be 'easily available' because 'available' is an adjective modified by an adverb. Also, 'there is no delivery charges' is incorrect because 'charges' is plural; it should be 'there are no delivery charges' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× They think if they wear T-shirts, they lost their traditional.

✓ They think if they wear T-shirts, they lose their tradition.

The verb 'lost' is past tense but the sentence is conditional and should be in present tense 'lose'. Also, 'their traditional' is incorrect; the noun 'tradition' should be used instead of the adjective 'traditional'.

× When I ask did I use to wear T-shirts because I'm very comfortable and relaxing T-shirt when I wanted to playground.

✓ When I was asked if I used to wear T-shirts because I was very comfortable and relaxed in T-shirts when I wanted to go to the playground.

The sentence has multiple tense and structure errors. 'When I ask did I use to wear' is incorrect; it should be 'When I was asked if I used to wear' to reflect past tense and correct question form. 'I'm very comfortable and relaxing T-shirt' is incorrect; it should be 'I was very comfortable and relaxed in T-shirts'. 'When I wanted to playground' is missing the preposition 'go to' before 'playground'.

× I easily play anything in T-shirts.

✓ I can easily play anything in T-shirts.

The sentence lacks a modal verb 'can' to express ability. Also, 'play anything' is awkward; however, since the instruction is to only correct grammar mistakes from the list, adding 'can' addresses the modal verb usage (ID 4). The preposition 'in' is correct here.