T-shirt— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words for coherence. Try to combine ideas and use more natural expressions. Also, correct grammar mistakes like 'everyday' should be 'every day' and 'there are very hot weather' should be 'the weather is very hot'.

Example: I wear T-shirts every day, especially during the summer because the weather is very hot, and T-shirts are comfortable to wear in such conditions.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit long and repetitive. Try to be concise and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, pay attention to verb tenses and sentence structure for clarity.

Example: Yes, I often buy T-shirts when I go to the market. For example, I recently bought many T-shirts with my friends at the 17th Sector Market in Chandigarh because I enjoy shopping for them.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and is somewhat repetitive. Use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, try to add more specific details or examples to support your answer.

Example: T-shirts are quite popular among older people in my country because they find simple designs fashionable and appreciate the comfort they provide.

Suggestion: There are grammatical mistakes such as 'I were' instead of 'I was'. Also, your answer is repetitive. Try to give a clear and concise response with supporting details using correct grammar.

Example: Yes, I definitely wore T-shirts as a kid because they were comfortable and easy to wear during my childhood.

× I wear T-shirts everyday because I like it most and especially in summer season.

✓ I wear T-shirts every day because I like them most, especially in the summer season.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'T-shirts', which is plural. The correct pronoun should be 'them'. Also, 'everyday' is an adjective meaning 'commonplace'; the correct phrase for frequency is 'every day'. Adding 'the' before 'summer season' is necessary as it refers to a specific season.

× In summer season there are very hot weather and T-shirts are very comfortable for me so that's why I wear it daily.

✓ In the summer season, the weather is very hot and T-shirts are very comfortable for me, so that's why I wear them daily.

'Weather' is an uncountable noun and should be used with singular verb 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, 'the' is needed before 'summer season'. The pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'T-shirts'. Commas are added for clarity.

× Yes, I often buy T-shirts whenever I go to market and I bought so many T-shirts with my friends when we went to 17th Sector Market of Chandigarh and I also like to buy T-shirts for me.

✓ Yes, I often buy T-shirts whenever I go to the market, and I bought many T-shirts with my friends when we went to the 17th Sector Market of Chandigarh. I also like to buy T-shirts for myself.

Added 'the' before 'market' and '17th Sector Market' as they are specific places. 'So many' is informal; 'many' is more appropriate here. 'For me' should be 'for myself' to correctly use the reflexive pronoun.

× T-shirts are very fashionable for older people in my country because older people think that a simple T-shirts are also fashionable and they like simple T-shirts because they are very comfortable in it.

✓ T-shirts are very fashionable for older people in my country because older people think that simple T-shirts are also fashionable and they like simple T-shirts because they are very comfortable in them.

The phrase 'a simple T-shirts' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'T-shirts'; it should be 'simple T-shirts'. The pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'T-shirts'.

× Yes, definitely. I wore T-shirts when I were a kid because T-shirts were very comfortable for me since my childhood.

✓ Yes, definitely. I wore T-shirts when I was a kid because T-shirts were very comfortable for me since my childhood.

The subject 'I' requires the verb 'was' in past tense, not 'were'. 'Were' is used with plural subjects or subjunctive mood.