T-shirt— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, keep your answer concise and natural by limiting to 3-4 sentences.

Example: I wear T-shirts every day because they are comfortable and easy to put on. They help me feel relaxed and are perfect for daily activities.

Suggestion: Your answer has many hesitations and incomplete thoughts. Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words to connect your points logically and be specific about your preferences.

Example: Yes, I often buy T-shirts because I wear them daily. I prefer to buy them at reasonable prices and in various colors and sizes to match different outfits.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Make sure to finish your sentences and provide specific details. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly and avoid vague expressions.

Example: In my country, T-shirts are quite fashionable among older people. They find them comfortable and stylish, which makes T-shirts a popular choice for casual wear.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and some redundancy. Use correct verb forms and try to express your ideas more clearly and naturally. Limit your answer to 3-4 sentences with specific reasons.

Example: Yes, I liked wearing T-shirts as a child because they were convenient and easy to wear. I could easily match them with simple clothes, which made them my favorite choice.

× Well I wear T-shirt on a daily basis as it give me a sense of comfort and feel so much cozy and is easy to wear and very convenient for daily use.

✓ Well I wear T-shirts on a daily basis as they give me a sense of comfort and feel so cozy and are easy to wear and very convenient for daily use.

The word 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' because the student refers to wearing them regularly, implying more than one. Also, 'it give' should be 'they give' to agree with the plural subject. Similarly, 'is easy' should be 'are easy' to match the plural subject. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× Uh, certainly as I wear T-shirt on a daily basis, uh, so that I have to, I have to buy a T-shirt often and I like to buy T-shirt in a reasonable price and in different colors and size and uh, mainly I like uh, over.

✓ Uh, certainly as I wear T-shirts on a daily basis, I have to buy T-shirts often and I like to buy T-shirts at a reasonable price and in different colors and sizes, and uh, mainly I like uh, over.

The word 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when talking about multiple items. Also, 'in a reasonable price' should be 'at a reasonable price' (preposition correction). 'Size' should be plural 'sizes' to match 'different colors'. This is a singular/plural and preposition usage issue.

× Well, As for me AT shirt for senior citizens are very fascinating and they all feel it very comfortable and with style and it gives them.

✓ Well, as for me, T-shirts for senior citizens are very fashionable and they all feel very comfortable and stylish and it gives them confidence.

'AT shirt' seems to be a typo and should be 'T-shirts'. 'Fascinating' is not the correct adjective here; 'fashionable' fits better. 'Feel it very comfortable' should be 'feel very comfortable'. The sentence was incomplete; added 'confidence' to complete the thought. This involves singular/plural, adjective use, and sentence structure issues.

× Certainly I was fond of wearing T-shirt when I was a kid since it was very convenient to use and it easy to wear and I can style with simple things so that I prefer.

✓ Certainly I was fond of wearing T-shirts when I was a kid since they were very convenient to use and easy to wear and I could style them with simple things, so I preferred them.

'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts'. 'It was' should be 'they were' to agree with plural. 'It easy to wear' should be 'easy to wear'. 'I can style' should be past tense 'I could style' to match past context. 'I prefer' should be past tense 'I preferred'. This is a past tense and singular/plural agreement issue.