T-shirt— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Та илүү тодорхой, шууд хариулт өгч, өгүүлбэрийн бүтцийг сайжруулах хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "I wear T-shirts about twice a month, mostly when the weather is hot." гэж хэлж болно. Мөн хариултдаа холбоос үг ашиглан илүү уялдаа холбоотой болгоорой.

Example: I usually wear T-shirts about twice a month, especially when the weather is very hot. It depends on my mood and the temperature outside.

Suggestion: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, грамматик алдаагүйгээр илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй. Мөн холбоос үг ашиглан санаагаа илүү логик болгоорой. Жишээ нь, "I don't often buy T-shirts because I prefer feminine dresses."

Example: To be honest, I don't often buy T-shirts because I generally prefer buying feminine dresses instead. That's why I rarely purchase T-shirts.

Suggestion: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, грамматик алдаагүйгээр илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй. Холбоос үг ашиглан санаагаа уялдуулах нь чухал. Жишээ нь, "In my country, older people often choose T-shirts because they are comfortable and cozy."

Example: In my country, older people often choose T-shirts because they find them very comfortable and cozy to wear.

Suggestion: Хариултаа илүү тодорхой, товч бөгөөд грамматик алдаагүйгээр илэрхийлэх хэрэгтэй. Холбоос үг ашиглан санаагаа уялдуулах нь чухал. Жишээ нь, "Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a child because my parents chose them for me, but now I don't wear them."

Example: Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a child because my parents chose them for me. However, now I rarely wear T-shirts.

× I wear T-shirt, almost two in a month.

✓ I wear T-shirts, almost two in a month.

The noun 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' because the quantity 'two' indicates more than one. In English, countable nouns require plural form when referring to more than one item.

× So if the weather is very hot and.

✓ So if the weather is very hot.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'and'. It should be completed or the conjunction removed to form a complete sentence.

× I am not buy 2 shirts often cause because I generally prefer buying the dresses more feminine clothes rather than T-shirts so that's the reason why I'm not buying T-shirts.

✓ I do not buy 2 shirts often because I generally prefer buying dresses and more feminine clothes rather than T-shirts, so that's the reason why I'm not buying T-shirts.

The verb 'buy' after 'am not' is incorrect; the correct form is 'do not buy' for present simple negative. Also, 'cause because' is redundant; use 'because'. The sentence structure is improved by adding conjunctions and articles appropriately.

× older people often choose T-shirts in my country. Uh, so it's really depends on the how comfortable T-shirt is.

✓ Older people often choose T-shirts in my country. Uh, so it really depends on how comfortable the T-shirt is.

The phrase 'it's really depends' is incorrect; 'it' should be followed by 'really depends' without 'is'. Also, 'the how comfortable T-shirt' is incorrect; 'the' should be before 'T-shirt' and 'how' should not have 'the' before it.

× T-shirt is one of the very cozy clothes for adults.

✓ T-shirts are some of the very cozy clothes for adults.

The subject 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to agree with 'clothes' which is plural. Also, 'is one of the very cozy clothes' is awkward; better to say 'are some of the very cozy clothes'.

× Yes, and I was a very young age.

✓ Yes, when I was very young.

The phrase 'I was a very young age' is incorrect; 'age' is a noun and cannot be used this way. The correct expression is 'when I was very young'.

× I always ring, I was always wearing T-shirts.

✓ I always wore, I was always wearing T-shirts.

The word 'ring' is incorrect here; likely intended 'wore' (past tense of wear). The sentence should use past tense 'wore' or past continuous 'was wearing' consistently.

× That's my mother and father's choice. So that's why I I use it to wear T-shirts.

✓ That's my mother and father's choice. So that's why I used to wear T-shirts.

The phrase 'I use it to wear' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I used to wear' to indicate past habitual action. Also, repeated 'I' is a typo.

× So but but now I never.

✓ But now I never wear them.

The sentence is incomplete and contains repeated conjunctions 'but but'. It should be completed to express the intended meaning clearly.