T-shirt— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to reduce filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words to improve coherence.

Example: I wear T-shirts every day because they are very comfortable. For example, I often wear them when I go jogging or do slow running. Additionally, I have many beautiful T-shirts that I like to wear casually.

Suggestion: Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences to make your answer clearer. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific reasons for your buying habits.

Example: I used to buy T-shirts often when I was young. However, as I grew up, I attend more formal occasions that require professional suits, so I seldom buy T-shirts now.

Suggestion: Clarify your ideas and avoid repetition. Use precise vocabulary and linking words to express your opinion clearly and logically.

Example: In my country, older people, including teachers, generally do not consider T-shirts fashionable. They prefer to wear other types of clothing that are more traditional or formal.

Suggestion: Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid filler words and be specific about your childhood clothing preferences.

Example: Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a kid. However, my mom often dressed me like a princess, so I also wore skirts frequently at that time.

× I wear T-shirt every day because I think it's very comfortable for me and also I can wear T-shirt to do the exercise like umm, slow running, jogging, umm, also, uh, I have a lot of umm, beautiful T-shirts.

✓ I wear T-shirts every day because I think they're very comfortable for me and also I can wear T-shirts to do exercises like umm, slow running, jogging, umm, also, uh, I have a lot of umm, beautiful T-shirts.

The word 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when referring to wearing them regularly or multiple items. Also, 'exercise' should be plural 'exercises' when referring to different types of physical activities.

× Actually, yes, I'm but, uh, yes, uh, when I was young, but after I growing up, umm, there have some formal occasions that we need to wear the, uh, wear the more professional suit. So I seldom to buy it now.

✓ Actually, yes, I'm, but, uh, yes, uh, when I was young, but after I grew up, umm, there were some formal occasions when we needed to wear, uh, more professional suits. So I seldom buy them now.

The phrase 'after I growing up' is incorrect; it should be 'after I grew up' to use the past tense. 'There have' should be 'there were' to match past tense. 'Need' should be 'needed' to agree with past time. 'Seldom to buy it now' is incorrect; it should be 'seldom buy them now' without 'to' and with plural 'them' referring to suits.

× there have some formal occasions that we need to wear the, uh, wear the more professional suit.

✓ there were some formal occasions when we needed to wear, uh, more professional suits.

The phrase 'there have some formal occasions' is incorrect; it should be 'there were some formal occasions' to match past tense and correct verb usage. Also, 'the more professional suit' should be plural 'more professional suits' because multiple occasions likely require multiple suits.

× So I seldom to buy it now.

✓ So I seldom buy them now.

The verb 'seldom' is an adverb and should not be followed by 'to' before the verb. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'suits'.

× I think teacher in my country, generally speaking, teacher is not fashionable, uh, among the old people for O older people, because the older people, they more like to likely to wear the umm, other clothes.

✓ I think teachers in my country, generally speaking, are not fashionable, uh, among older people, because older people are more likely to wear, umm, other clothes.

'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' when speaking generally. 'Teacher is' should be 'teachers are' to agree in number. 'For O older people' is unclear and corrected to 'among older people'. 'They more like to likely to wear' is redundant and corrected to 'are more likely to wear'.

× teacher is not fashionable

✓ teachers are not fashionable

When referring to 'teachers' plural, the verb should be 'are' not 'is' to agree in number.

× because the older people, they more like to likely to wear the umm, other clothes.

✓ because older people are more likely to wear, umm, other clothes.

The pronoun 'they' is unnecessary and redundant after 'older people'. Also, 'more like to likely to' is incorrect; it should be 'more likely to'.

× Did you wear T-shirts when you were a kid?

✓ Did you wear T-shirts when you were a kid?

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× except for the uh, for the T-shirt, I always dress uh, my mom will dress me as a Princess, uh, which at that time I wear skirts also.

✓ Except for the uh, T-shirts, I was always dressed by my mom as a princess, uh, and at that time I also wore skirts.

'Except for the uh, for the T-shirt' is redundant; simplified to 'Except for the uh, T-shirts'. 'I always dress' is incorrect in this context; passive voice 'I was always dressed' is appropriate. 'My mom will dress me' should be past tense 'my mom dressed me'. 'Which at that time I wear skirts also' is awkward; corrected to 'and at that time I also wore skirts' to maintain past tense and clarity.