Number— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and slightly off-topic when you mention struggling to remember words instead of numbers. Try to be more concise and directly address the question about numbers. Also, avoid repeating words and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Example: Honestly, I am not very good at remembering numbers. For example, I often forget phone numbers or important dates shortly after hearing them. However, I try to write them down to help me remember better.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and repetitions. Try to organize your ideas logically using linking words and avoid filler words. Be specific about how numbers are important in your future work and keep your sentences clear and concise.

Example: Yes, I believe numbers are essential in my future work because they help illustrate data clearly. For instance, using statistics can convince clients and build their trust in my work, which is important for career success.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and repetitions. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid repeating words. Also, provide a clearer explanation with linking words to improve coherence.

Example: To be honest, I did not enjoy studying math as a child because it required strict logical thinking and a lot of effort. Therefore, I found it difficult to stay motivated and focused on calculations.

Suggestion: Your answer is quite negative and lacks specific details. Try to provide a more balanced response by explaining why certain numbers might be important or not to you. Use clearer sentence structures and avoid vague phrases.

Example: I don't have any particular numbers that are important to me because I usually don't pay much attention to them. However, I understand that some numbers, like birthdays or anniversaries, can be meaningful to others.

× Well, honestly speaking, I have incredibly poor memory, especially when it comes to the numbers.

✓ Well, honestly speaking, I have an incredibly poor memory, especially when it comes to numbers.

The word 'memory' is a singular noun and should be preceded by an article 'an' when described as 'incredibly poor'. Also, 'the numbers' is incorrect here because it refers to numbers in general, so 'numbers' without 'the' is appropriate.

× For for instance, I struggle to remember the words within short time.

✓ For instance, I struggle to remember words within a short time.

The phrase 'For for instance' contains a repeated word; it should be 'For instance'. Also, 'the words' is too specific; 'words' is better here. 'Within short time' is missing an article; it should be 'within a short time'.

× It's also as a as a numbers, as a very important evidence to show to the people that can convince you know, then and then to believe on you and to trust you so that you can get a good job in in the future jobs.

✓ It's also a number, a very important piece of evidence to show people that can convince them to believe in you and trust you so that you can get a good job in the future.

The phrase 'as a as a numbers' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'a number'. 'Evidence' is uncountable and should not have 'a' before it; instead, use 'a very important piece of evidence'. 'Show to the people' should be 'show people'. 'Convince you know, then and then to believe on you' is unclear and should be 'convince them to believe in you'. 'In in the future jobs' should be 'in the future'.

× To be honest, I don't like doing the calculations when I was young because calculations requires a very very strict logic thinking and efforts.

✓ To be honest, I didn't like doing calculations when I was young because calculations require very strict logical thinking and effort.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't like' with past time 'when I was young'; it should be past tense 'didn't like'. 'Calculations requires' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; 'calculations require' is correct. 'A very very strict logic thinking and efforts' is awkward; 'very strict logical thinking and effort' is better.

× But as I as I see I don't, I don't I cannot pull my heart and energy to it.

✓ But as I see, I cannot bring my heart and energy to it.

The phrase 'as I as I see' is repetitive and incorrect; it should be 'as I see'. 'I don't, I don't I cannot' is redundant and confusing; 'I cannot' suffices. 'Pull my heart and energy to it' is unnatural; 'bring my heart and energy to it' is more appropriate.

× As I mentioned before, I hate numbers, so definitely there's no numbers that I like or is crucial for me.

✓ As I mentioned before, I hate numbers, so definitely there are no numbers that I like or that are crucial for me.

'There's no numbers' is incorrect because 'numbers' is plural; it should be 'there are no numbers'. Also, 'or is crucial' should be 'or that are crucial' to agree with plural 'numbers'.

× I think the number is just very usual, there's nothing difference between others.

✓ I think numbers are just very usual; there's no difference between them and others.

'The number is just very usual' is awkward; 'numbers are just very usual' fits better. 'There's nothing difference' is incorrect; it should be 'there's no difference'. 'Between others' needs clarification; 'between them and others' is clearer.