Number— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复表达，如“easily”重复使用。可以增加具体例子来丰富内容，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Example: Yes, I am quite good at remembering numbers. For example, I can quickly recall my friends' phone numbers and also keep track of my daily expenses without much effort.

Suggestion: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，应注意时态和句子结构。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并具体说明数字在工作中的作用。

Example: Yes, I will definitely use numbers in my future work because as a fashion design major, I need to measure body details precisely to create well-fitting clothes.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多，如“the study maths”应为“studying math”。建议使用连接词表达转折，并丰富细节。

Example: Yes, I enjoyed studying math when I was a child because it was easy for me. However, as I grew older, I found it became more challenging.

Suggestion: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词错误较多。建议理清思路，使用连接词，并具体说明“student number”的重要性。

Example: In recent years, my student ID number has been very important to me because I use it to check my class schedule, access exams, and enter the school premises.

× I can easily remind my cost on the daily life.

✓ I can easily remember my costs in daily life.

这里 'cost' 应该用复数形式 'costs'，因为指的是多项费用；另外 'remind' 用错了，应该用 'remember' 表示记住。

× Yes I will use numbers because I am major in clothes making.

✓ Yes, I will use numbers because I major in clothes making.

这里 'am major in' 用法错误，正确表达是 'major in'，不需要 'am'。

× However it needs numbers to calculate the body detail and I should use that for more exact.

✓ However, it needs numbers to calculate the body details and I should use them to be more exact.

'detail' 应该用复数 'details'，因为指多个细节；'that' 指代不明确，改为复数 'them' 指代 'numbers'；'for more exact' 语法不正确，改为 'to be more exact'。

× Yes, I enjoyed the study maths when I was a kid because that was easy for me.

✓ Yes, I enjoyed studying math when I was a kid because it was easy for me.

'the study maths' 结构错误，应该用动名词 'studying math'；'that' 指代不明确，改为 'it'。

× However, when I grew up I think it's been more difficult for me.

✓ However, when I grew up, I thought it was more difficult for me.

这里时态不一致，描述过去的感受应使用过去时 'thought' 和 'was'。

× In recent year, I think the student number is important for me because I need this detail to check my class and find my exam easily which I can use it to get to school.

✓ In recent years, I think the student number is important to me because I need this detail to check my class and find my exam easily, which I can use to get to school.

'year' 应用复数 'years'；'important for me' 改为 'important to me' 更地道；'which I can use it' 中 'it' 多余，应去掉。