Number— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları var ve anlam karışıklığı yaratıyor. "I not good" yerine "I'm not good" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, ikinci cümleniz anlam olarak net değil ve gereksiz bilgi içeriyor. Daha doğal ve etkili bir cevap için, doğrudan soruya odaklanmalı ve kısa, net cümleler kullanmalısınız.

Example: No, I'm not good at remembering numbers because I find them difficult to memorize.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve yapı açısından bazı hatalar var. "You don't need" yerine "I don't need" demelisiniz çünkü kendi işinizden bahsediyorsunuz. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha akıcı ve doğal yapmak için bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz.

Example: I don't need to remember numbers in my future work because I want to be a translator, and my job mainly involves languages, not numbers.

Suggestion: Cümlenizde zaman uyumsuzluğu ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "I hate" yerine "I hated" kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümleniz çok uzun ve karmaşık, daha kısa ve net cümleler tercih edin. "You usually see as a idiot" ifadesi yanlış, "you are usually seen as an idiot" olmalı. Daha doğal ve etkili bir cevap için cümlelerinizi sadeleştirin ve bağlaçlarla bağlayın.

Example: No, I hated studying math as a child because it was very complicated and hard to understand. Also, in my country, people who are not good at math are often seen as less intelligent.

Suggestion: Cevabınız çok kısa ve açıklayıcı değil. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamışsınız ancak destekleyici detaylar eklememişsiniz. Daha etkili bir cevap için, neden önemli olmadığını veya hangi sayılarla ilgilenmediğinizi açıklayabilirsiniz.

Example: None of the numbers are particularly important to me because I don't work with numbers in my daily life.

× No, I not good at remembering numbers, but I can't remember all of the languages in my mind.

✓ No, I am not good at remembering numbers, but I can't remember all of the languages in my mind.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' for the present tense 'to be' with the subject 'I'. The correct form is 'I am not good'. This is a present tense issue because the verb 'to be' is incorrectly used.

× You don't need to remember numbers in my occupation because I want to be a translator and it's all about languages, not numbers.

✓ You don't need to remember numbers in my occupation because I want to be a translator and it's all about languages, not numbers.

No correction needed as the modal verb 'don't need to' is used correctly here.

× No, when I was a child I hate the math because it's so complicated and it cannot be understandable and even in my country if you cannot do math you usually see as a idiot in my country.

✓ No, when I was a child I hated math because it was so complicated and it was not understandable, and even in my country if you cannot do math you are usually seen as an idiot.

The verb 'hate' should be in past tense 'hated' to match the past time frame 'when I was a child'. Also, 'it's' should be 'it was' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Cannot be understandable' is incorrect; 'was not understandable' is better. 'You usually see as a idiot' is incorrect; the passive form 'you are usually seen as an idiot' is correct. 'a idiot' should be 'an idiot' due to vowel sound.