Number— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Жауабыңызда грамматикалық қателер бар және сөйлемдеріңіз кейде түсініксіз. Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, мысалдарды нақты әрі қысқа етіп беріңіз. Мысалы, 'Yes, I am good at remembering numbers because I am good at math. For example, if someone tells me a price, I can remember it throughout the day.'

Example: Yes, I am good at remembering numbers because I am good at math. For example, if someone tells me a price, I can remember it throughout the day.

Suggestion: Жауабыңызда сөйлем құрылымы мен сөздерді дұрыс қолдану маңызды. Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, қосымша ақпаратты логикалық түрде беріңіз. Мысалы, 'Although my future job is not directly related to numbers, I believe numbers are important in daily life, such as managing money.'

Example: Although my future job is not directly related to numbers, I believe numbers are important in daily life, such as managing money.

Suggestion: Жауабыңыз жақсы, бірақ сөйлемдерді нақты әрі табиғи етіп құрастырыңыз. Қосымша ақпаратты байланыстыру үшін байланыстыру сөздерін қолданыңыз. Мысалы, 'Yes, I enjoyed studying math as a child. In fact, I was top of my class in math, and I still enjoy it now.'

Example: Yes, I enjoyed studying math as a child. In fact, I was top of my class in math, and I still enjoy it now.

Suggestion: Жауабыңыз түсініксіз және сөйлемдеріңіз байланыссыз. Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, мысалдармен толықтырыңыз. Мысалы, 'Important numbers for me are those related to money and my career, such as salary figures or targets.'

Example: Important numbers for me are those related to money and my career, such as salary figures or targets.

× Yes, I'm good at remembering numbers cause of I'm good at maths and remembering things.

✓ Yes, I'm good at remembering numbers because I'm good at maths and remembering things.

The word 'cause' is an informal contraction of 'because' and is not appropriate in formal speech. Use 'because' to correctly express the reason.

× In my future job, I don't have, uh, any connections with number, but I believe that all our day depends on the numbers, like money cashes, like something like that.

✓ In my future job, I don't have, uh, any connection with numbers, but I believe that our whole day depends on numbers, like money, cash, and things like that.

The phrase 'connections with number' is incorrect; it should be 'connection with numbers' to match singular/plural usage and correct preposition. Also, 'money cashes' is incorrect; 'money' and 'cash' are uncountable nouns and should be used properly.

× In my future job, I don't have, uh, any connections with number, but I believe that all our day depends on the numbers, like money cashes, like something like that.

✓ In my future job, I don't have, uh, any connection with numbers, but I believe that our whole day depends on numbers, like money, cash, and things like that.

The word 'number' should be plural 'numbers' to refer to multiple numbers. Also, 'connections' should be singular 'connection' to match the context.

× Yes I did, furthermore I still study maths at school and when I was a child I uh, was the first of the class in the math and still I'm into math.

✓ Yes, I did. Furthermore, I still study maths at school, and when I was a child, I was the top of the class in math, and I'm still into math.

The phrase 'first of the class in the math' is awkward; 'top of the class in math' is more natural. Also, 'maths' and 'math' should be consistent; 'math' is American English, 'maths' is British English. Commas are added for clarity.

× I don't think that some numbers are central for me and it depends on the cash, maybe if it's Milan.

✓ I don't think that any numbers are central to me, and it depends on the cash, maybe if it's Milan.

The phrase 'some numbers' is vague; 'any numbers' fits better in negative sentences. Also, 'central for me' should be 'central to me' to use the correct preposition.