News— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and concise response with correct sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, start with a direct answer, then explain why you are interested in news, and give specific examples.

Example: Yes, I am interested in news because it helps me stay updated about events around the world. For example, I enjoy listening to sports news and other activities that keep me informed and entertained.

Suggestion: Your answer has some good points but lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Use correct tenses and linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and be specific about the technology you use.

Example: When I was young, I used to read newspapers with my father. However, due to advances in technology, I now usually read news on my smartphone apps, which help me stay connected with various ongoing activities.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has many errors and unclear phrases. Avoid incomplete sentences and incorrect words. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly and give a polite opinion about journalists' work.

Example: No, I would not like to be a journalist because I am an introverted person and I am afraid of facing many people. Also, I am unwilling to talk with strangers. However, I appreciate the important work that journalists do.

Suggestion: Your answer shows good ideas but has grammatical errors and redundancy. Use correct sentence structures and avoid repeating similar ideas. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Example: Yes, I read the news this morning because I have a habit of scrolling through news every day when I wake up. It helps me stay active and informed about what is happening in the world.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct answer and explain with clear reasons. Avoid incomplete sentences and confusing phrases. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

Example: Yes, I often talk with my friends about different news topics. However, they usually avoid discussing political situations because they are not interested in such topics. We prefer to talk about other news instead.

× Yes, I am interested in listening news as news halves.

✓ Yes, I am interested in listening to news as news halves.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by a noun. So, it should be 'listening to news'. This is a common preposition usage error.

× Also true.

✓ That is also true.

The sentence 'Also true.' is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'That is' completes the sentence structure.

× Stay updated regarding the things that are going on around the world.

✓ It helps me stay updated regarding the things that are going on around the world.

The original sentence is a fragment without a subject. Adding 'It helps me' completes the sentence structure.

× And also it provides a different kind of entertainment regarding various activities such as.

✓ It also provides a different kind of entertainment regarding various activities such as sports or any games happening in the world.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Completing the sentence with examples and proper structure is necessary.

× Spores are any games happening in the.

✓ Sports or any games happening in the world.

The word 'Spores' is a typo for 'Sports'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs to specify the location or context, e.g., 'in the world'.

× When I was young, I used to read newspaper with my father.

✓ When I was young, I used to read the newspaper with my father.

The noun 'newspaper' is countable and singular here, so it requires the definite article 'the'.

× Holly be due to the change in our diplomatic technology, I usually read news from my cell phone apps where I get stay connected with various.

✓ However, due to the change in our digital technology, I usually read news from my cell phone apps where I stay connected with various.

'Holly be' is a mishearing or typo for 'However'. 'Diplomatic technology' is incorrect; it should be 'digital technology'. Also, 'I get stay connected' is incorrect; 'I stay connected' is correct.

× Activities that is ongoing throughout.

✓ Activities that are ongoing throughout.

The subject 'Activities' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'.

× No, I don't really want to become a journalist because I am an introvert person.

✓ No, I don't really want to become a journalist because I am an introverted person.

The adjective form 'introverted' is more appropriate than the noun 'introvert' used as an adjective here.

× Anne I'm very afraid of facing Mars.

✓ And I'm very afraid of facing Mars.

'Anne' is a typo for 'And'. Also, 'Mars' is likely a mishearing of 'masses' or 'people'.

× Also I have. Unwillingness to talk with strangers.

✓ Also, I have an unwillingness to talk with strangers.

The sentence is fragmented and missing the article 'an' before 'unwillingness'. Also, the period after 'have' is incorrect.

× However, I appreciated the work that journalists do. Howdy face.

✓ However, I appreciate the work that journalists do, even though I am afraid to face people.

'Appreciated' should be present tense 'appreciate' to match the context. 'Howdy face' is unclear and likely a mishearing; replaced with a clearer expression.

× Yes, I am updated with the news of today's morning because I have habit of scrolling a news in every morning when I get up.

✓ Yes, I am updated with the news this morning because I have a habit of scrolling through the news every morning when I get up.

'Have habit' needs the article 'a'. 'Scrolling a news' should be 'scrolling through the news'. 'Of today's morning' is better as 'this morning'.

× And it helps me to stay really active and I have a lot of ideas about the world, the fact and things are happening in the world.

✓ And it helps me to stay really active, and I have a lot of ideas about the world, the facts, and things that are happening in the world.

Added commas for clarity. 'Fact' should be plural 'facts'. Added 'that' to connect the clause properly.

× So really.

✓ So, really.

The phrase 'So really.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding a comma improves readability, but the sentence is still fragmentary; context needed.

× Yes, I do see there are different hard topic of everyday news with my friend circle.

✓ Yes, I do see there are different hard topics of everyday news with my friend circle.

'Topic' should be plural 'topics' to agree with 'different' and 'are'.

× And regarding political situations, they do not really prefer deletion or did they really want to hear about such situations?

✓ And regarding political situations, they do not really prefer discussion, nor do they really want to hear about such situations.

'Deletion' is incorrect; likely meant 'discussion'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× But yeah, related to other topic they.

✓ But yeah, related to other topics, they do.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. Added 'do' to complete the sentence and made 'topic' plural to agree with 'other'.