News— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答中缺少动词时态的正确使用，应该说“I am always interested”。另外，回答较为简单，可以适当丰富内容，使表达更自然流畅。

Example: Yes, I am always interested in international events and entertainment news because they help me understand the world and relax after work.

Suggestion: 回答中语法和表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Example: I usually get news from an app called Weibo, which is a popular news platform in my country. It customizes news based on my interests, so I can easily find what I want to read.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误，如“to be honestly”应为“to be honest”，以及“conversation skills”应为“communication skills”。建议注意词汇准确性和句子简洁性。

Example: To be honest, I don't want to be a journalist because I lack strong communication and writing skills, which are essential for interviewing people and writing engaging articles.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“write this news in TikTok”应为“saw this news on TikTok”。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，并使句子更连贯。

Example: Yes, I read some international news this morning on TikTok. It was about American trade policy. Although I don't fully understand all the details, I think it's important to keep up with international affairs.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误，如“between US”应为“between us”，以及表达不够简洁。建议使用更自然的表达和连接词。

Example: Yes, I often talk with my friends about entertainment news because we all like the same celebrities. It's a great way to connect and strengthen our friendship.

× Yes, I always interested in international event news and entertainment news.

✓ Yes, I am always interested in international event news and entertainment news.

这里缺少be动词，正确的表达应该是“I am interested”，表示现在的状态。缺少be动词导致句子时态和结构错误。

× I usually find news in an app named Weibo and that is like the integral in international is a traditional news app in our country and is also set the priority for you according to your preference.

✓ I usually find news in an app named Weibo, which is like the integral in international; it is a traditional news app in our country and also sets the priority for you according to your preference.

句子结构复杂且不清晰，'set'应改为'sets'以符合主语单数，且需要用关系代词连接句子。

× To be honestly, I don't want to be a journalist because I don't have a good conversation skills and writing skills, so I can't write a fascinating essay and I can't create a good interaction with someone who I interviewed.

✓ To be honest, I don't want to be a journalist because I don't have good conversation skills and writing skills, so I can't write a fascinating essay and I can't create a good interaction with someone whom I interview.

'To be honestly'应为'To be honest'，'conversation skills'前不需要冠词，'someone who I interviewed'应改为'whom I interview'以符合语法。

× Yes, I read a news about international events this morning.

✓ Yes, I read news about international events this morning.

'news'是不可数名词，不能用'a'，应直接使用'news'。

× I write this news in TikTok and it's about American trade policy.

✓ I saw this news on TikTok and it's about American trade policy.

'write'用错，应为'saw'或'read'，且介词应为'on TikTok'，表示在平台上看到。

× Although I can't totally understand this policy meaningful but I think it's good for me to know some international.

✓ Although I can't totally understand the meaning of this policy, I think it's good for me to know some international news.

句子结构混乱，'meaningful'用错，应为'the meaning of this policy'，且句中不应同时使用'although'和'but'。

× Yes, I often talk with my friends about the entertainment news umm, because we're all interested in our entertainment circle and we all have the favorite stars, idols, so it's a good topic between US and it can build or bond in our relationship.

✓ Yes, I often talk with my friends about entertainment news because we're all interested in our entertainment circle and we all have favorite stars and idols, so it's a good topic between us and it can build a bond in our relationship.

'the entertainment news'中'the'不必要，'between US'应为'between us'，'build or bond'表达不清，应为'build a bond'。