News— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and use correct prepositions and articles. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating similar phrases.

Example: Yes, I am interested in news, especially economic and environmental topics, as well as other interesting current events.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using the correct term 'social media' (uncountable) and by adding linking words to enrich the response.

Example: I usually find news on social media platforms, such as YouTube and Instagram, because they provide quick updates and diverse perspectives.

Suggestion: Good answer with clear reasons. To improve, use plural form 'opportunities' and add linking words to make the answer more coherent.

Example: Yes, I would like to be a journalist because it offers opportunities to explore various topics and, moreover, to share important information with the public.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to respond directly and clearly, using correct tense and sentence structure.

Example: No, I haven't read the news this morning. I usually read the news in the afternoon these days.

Suggestion: Your answer is too long and contains filler words and grammatical errors. Try to be concise, use correct expressions, and add linking words for coherence.

Example: Yes, I often talk with my friends about the news because it is a relaxing activity. Moreover, discussing news helps me feel more confident and allows us to share our ideas.

× Yes, I'm interested in news, for example, like economic news or an in environment news or some other something interesting news.

✓ Yes, I'm interested in news, for example, economic news or environmental news or some other interesting news.

The word 'news' is uncountable and does not take plural forms like 'newses'. Also, 'an in environment news' is incorrect; it should be 'environmental news' as an adjective describing the type of news. The phrase 'some other something interesting news' is redundant and awkward; 'some other interesting news' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I usually find news in social medias such as YouTube or Instagram.

✓ I usually find news on social media such as YouTube or Instagram.

The term 'social media' is uncountable and should not be pluralized as 'social medias'. Also, the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to platforms like YouTube or Instagram.

× Yes, I would like to be a journalist because it offers opportunity to explore various topics and share important information with the public.

✓ Yes, I would like to be a journalist because it offers opportunities to explore various topics and share important information with the public.

The word 'opportunity' should be pluralized to 'opportunities' to match the context of multiple chances to explore topics. This is a quantifier issue related to modal verb context.

× Know about I read news in the afternoon these days.

✓ Actually, I read the news in the afternoon these days.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing articles. 'Know about' is misplaced and should be replaced with 'Actually' to indicate clarification. 'Read news' requires the definite article 'the' before 'news' to specify the news being read.

× Yes, I often talk with my friends about the news because I think, uh, talk to a friend with news is very relaxed things and uh, let me feel more confident about the news and we can talk about our, our idea.

✓ Yes, I often talk with my friends about the news because I think talking with friends about the news is very relaxing and makes me feel more confident about the news, and we can share our ideas.

The phrase 'talk to a friend with news' is awkward; 'talking with friends about the news' is more natural. 'Relaxed things' should be 'relaxing' to correctly use the adjective form. Also, 'our idea' should be plural 'our ideas' to reflect multiple thoughts. Prepositions and word forms were corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.