News— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarlar ve anlamsal belirsizlikler var. Cümlenizi doğrudan soruya yanıt verecek şekilde ve daha net ifade edin.

Example: Yes, I am interested in news because they help me stay informed about current events. However, I often prefer watching short videos on TikTok for quick updates.

Suggestion: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal karışıklıklar mevcut. Daha açık ve doğru cümle yapıları kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, bağlaçlarla cümlelerinizi daha tutarlı hale getirin.

Example: I usually find news through social media platforms like TikTok and Instagram because they provide quick and easy access to information.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda daha net ve düzenli bir yapı kullanmalısınız. Gereksiz tekrarları ve dolaylı ifadeleri azaltarak doğrudan yanıt verin. Ayrıca, bağlaçlarla cümlelerinizi bağlayın.

Example: Although I admire journalists, I have already decided to become a scientist in the future because that is my true passion.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda gereksiz dolgu kelimelerinden kaçının ve cümlenizi tamamlayın. Daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanarak doğrudan soruya yanıt verin.

Example: No, I haven't read the news this morning because I was preparing for my IELTS exam. Usually, I prefer scrolling through TikTok for quick updates.

Suggestion: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hatalarına dikkat edin ve daha spesifik detaylar verin. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarları azaltarak daha akıcı bir cevap verin.

Example: Yes, I often discuss news with my friends to stay informed. For example, recently we talked about the wildfires that happened a few weeks ago.

× It's as clear as the day that nowadays news are very important and fundamental to keep in touch with the things.

✓ It's as clear as the day that nowadays news is very important and fundamental to keep in touch with things.

'News' is an uncountable noun and should be treated as singular. Therefore, the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. Ayrıca, 'the things' ifadesi gereksiz ve anlamsızdır, sadece 'things' kullanılmalıdır.

× Everyone knows that news are old fashioned and numerous people finds news not so in informatable and they usually prefer to look at TikTok or Instagram, which I do a lot.

✓ Everyone knows that news is old fashioned and numerous people find news not so informative and they usually prefer to look at TikTok or Instagram, which I do a lot.

'News' is uncountable and singular, bu yüzden 'news is' olmalı. 'People' çoğul olduğu için fiil 'find' olmalı. 'Informatable' yanlış bir kelimedir, doğrusu 'informative' olmalıdır.

× Everyone knows that news are old fashioned and numerous people finds news not so in informatable and they usually prefer to look at TikTok or Instagram, which I do a lot.

✓ Everyone knows that news is old fashioned and numerous people find news not so informative and they usually prefer to look at TikTok or Instagram, which I do a lot.

'People' çoğul olduğu için fiil 'find' olmalıdır, 'finds' yanlış kullanılmıştır.

× I think it would be funny because my idol has the same job but uh, I already decided what's will I do in the future and it's scientist and yeah it would be cool but I already have a dream in my future so no.

✓ I think it would be funny because my idol has the same job but uh, I already decided what I will do in the future and it's to be a scientist and yeah it would be cool but I already have a dream for my future so no.

'What's will I do' yanlış bir yapıdır, doğrusu 'what I will do' olmalıdır. Ayrıca 'it's scientist' ifadesi eksik, 'it's to be a scientist' şeklinde düzeltilmelidir. 'In my future' yerine 'for my future' daha uygundur.

× No, this morning I was dealing with the excitement about my IELTS exam. So uh, I don't know. Umm, reading news is very cool, but as I said, I I usually prefer to scrolling TikTok in order to.

✓ No, this morning I was dealing with the excitement about my IELTS exam. So uh, I don't know. Umm, reading news is very cool, but as I said, I usually prefer scrolling TikTok instead.

'Prefer' fiilinden sonra 'to' + fiilin yalın hali veya doğrudan '-ing' formu gelir. 'Prefer to scrolling' yanlış, doğrusu 'prefer scrolling' veya 'prefer to scroll' olmalıdır. Ayrıca cümle tamamlanmamış ve anlamsızdır, 'in order to' kaldırılmıştır.

× Yes, personally, I frequently talk with my friends about the news in order to reach informations about what have been done.

✓ Yes, personally, I frequently talk with my friends about the news in order to reach information about what has been done.

'Information' sayılamayan bir isimdir, çoğul hali 'informations' yanlış kullanılmıştır. Ayrıca 'what have been done' yerine 'what has been done' kullanılmalıdır çünkü 'what' tekil anlamda kullanılır.

× Yes, personally, I frequently talk with my friends about the news in order to reach informations about what have been done.

✓ Yes, personally, I frequently talk with my friends about the news in order to reach information about what has been done.

'What' tekil olduğu için fiil 'has' olmalıdır, 'have' yanlış kullanılmıştır.

× Uh, for example, last time we talked about the fires, uh, which has been a few times ago.

✓ Uh, for example, last time we talked about the fires, uh, which happened a few times ago.

'Which has been a few times ago' ifadesi yanlış ve anlamsızdır. Doğrusu 'which happened a few times ago' veya 'which occurred a few times ago' olmalıdır.