News— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition and grammar errors, and use linking words to connect ideas. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and give one specific example of what kind of news you follow.

Example: Yes, I am interested in news. I follow world and technology news to keep up with global events and industry developments. Because I’m short on time, I usually watch short news clips on the YouTube app while commuting, which helps me stay informed quickly.

Suggestion: Organize the answer: open with a clear topic sentence, then list main sources using linking words (for example, first, also, finally). Correct grammar (singular/plural, articles) and give one precise example of a source you trust.

Example: I usually find news online through social media and video platforms. For example, I follow credible channels on YouTube and check headlines on news apps; I also sometimes read a free newspaper from a nearby supermarket when I have time.

Suggestion: Be direct and coherent: state your position clearly (yes/no/would like to), then explain reasons with linking words. Correct contradictory statements and awkward phrasing. Keep it brief and specific about which aspects appeal or not.

Example: Not really — I wouldn’t choose journalism as my career. Although I respect journalists because the job requires hard work and research, my background is in computing and I prefer working in IT rather than reporting news.

Suggestion: Be concise and correct grammar: start with a clear answer (yes/no), then briefly explain why with one linking phrase. Avoid repeating phrases. Mention when you will catch up on news if relevant.

Example: No, I didn’t read the news this morning because I was preparing for a medical exam. I plan to watch a news bulletin at home this evening to relax and catch up on important updates.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence, use linking words to add details, and give a specific, relevant example without unnecessary or sensitive details. Correct small grammatical mistakes and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I often discuss news with my friends, mostly via WhatsApp and phone calls because we rarely meet in person. We share articles and comment on major stories; for example, we recently discussed the death of a well-known Indian actor that was trending on social media.

× Definitely, news are an important part of the life through which you can get the knowledge about the whole world.

✓ Definitely, news is an important part of life through which you can get knowledge about the whole world.

'News' is an uncountable noun treated as singular in English, so use the singular verb 'is' and no article 'the' before 'life' and no 'the' before 'knowledge'. Remove extra articles to make the sentence natural. Grammar problem type ID:1

× I used to read a newspaper everyday.

✓ I used to read a newspaper every day.

Use 'every day' (two words) to mean 'each day'. No article change is needed for 'a newspaper'. Also separate 'every day' as two words. Grammar problem type ID:22

× However due to lack of time I read the news on YouTube app while watching the the videos.

✓ However, due to a lack of time I read the news on the YouTube app while watching videos.

Add comma after 'However'. Use 'a lack of time' or 'lack of time' with article for naturalness. Use 'the YouTube app' and remove duplicate 'the' and unnecessary article before 'videos'. 'Watching videos' is correct present participle usage. Grammar problem type ID:10

× These days there are several ways that you can find news.

✓ These days there are several ways in which you can find news.

Sentence structure 'ways in which' is more natural than 'ways that'. Keep 'news' uncountable. Change 'that you can find news' to 'in which you can find news' for proper relative clause. Grammar problem type ID:17

× Everyone use social media.

✓ Everyone uses social media.

With singular indefinite pronoun 'everyone' the verb must take third person singular 'uses'. Grammar problem type ID:2

× For instance, myself, I have downloaded the Tiktok and the YouTube app.

✓ For instance, I have downloaded the TikTok and YouTube apps.

Do not use 'myself' as subject; use 'I'. Brand names: 'TikTok' and 'YouTube'. Use plural 'apps' because two apps were downloaded. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I use the YouTube app to watch the videos.

✓ I use the YouTube app to watch videos.

Drop 'the' before 'videos' when speaking generally. 'The YouTube app' is fine; 'videos' is general plural. Grammar problem type ID:17

× However, you can read a newspaper and borrow for many superstore which provides free.

✓ However, you can read a newspaper or borrow one from many supermarkets that provide them for free.

Original has missing object and incorrect noun forms. 'Borrow one from many supermarkets that provide them for free' supplies the missing object 'one' and corrects 'superstore' to 'supermarkets' and 'provides' to 'provide'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I have completed my diploma in Computing sport.

✓ I have completed my diploma in Computing and Sports.

Original phrase unclear; likely means 'Computing and Sports' or 'Computer Science'. Use parallel nouns and proper capitalization: 'Computing and Sports'. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Due to lack of knowledge and study, I want to be a journalist in the near future.

✓ Due to a lack of knowledge and study, I want to become a journalist in the near future.

Use 'a lack of' for naturalness and 'want to become' is more idiomatic than 'want to be' when expressing future career aspiration. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I do not have keen interest in this field.

✓ I do not have a keen interest in this field.

Include the article 'a' before 'keen interest'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× However, I respect the this position behind because it needs a lot of hard work.

✓ However, I respect this position because it requires a lot of hard work.

Remove extra article 'the' before 'this'. 'Behind' is unnecessary. Use 'requires' to express necessity and 'a lot of' is correct. Grammar problem type ID:17

× To be very honest with you, today I did not get enough time to read the news I was preparing for my health examination so I spent my hours morning hours in studying rather than reading the news.

✓ To be very honest with you, today I did not have enough time to read the news because I was preparing for my health examination, so I spent my morning hours studying rather than reading the news.

Use 'did not have' instead of 'did not get'. Fix word order 'morning hours' to 'morning hours' and remove extra 'in'. Use comma and 'because' to connect clauses properly. 'Spent my morning hours studying' is correct past continuous description. Grammar problem type ID:5

× But I would definitely watch the news from the examination at home for relaxation and get knowledge.

✓ But I would definitely watch the news at home after the examination for relaxation and to get information.

'Watch the news after the examination' is clearer. Use 'to get information' or 'to learn' instead of 'get knowledge'. Maintain infinitive 'to get' for purpose. Change preposition 'from' to 'after'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Yes, definitely. I usually talk with my friends about the news, sometimes on WhatsApp and on the calls.

✓ Yes, definitely. I usually talk with my friends about the news, sometimes on WhatsApp and on calls.

Use 'on calls' rather than 'on the calls' for general reference. 'Talk with' is acceptable but 'talk to' is also common. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I barely get time to meet my friends in person.

✓ I rarely get time to meet my friends in person.

'Barely' means 'almost not at all' and is often inappropriate here; 'rarely' better expresses infrequency. Grammar problem type ID:14

× We share our thoughts through the social media apps.

✓ We share our thoughts through social media apps.

Drop 'the' before 'social media apps' when speaking generally. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Recently I shared a news of death of the one of the famous actors named Dharminderi in India.

✓ Recently I shared news of the death of one of the famous actors named Dharminderi in India.

Use 'news' uncountable (no 'a'), include 'the death' and remove extra 'the' before 'one'. Correct word order 'one of the famous actors'. Grammar problem type ID:1