News— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence stating whether you are interested, then give one or two specific reasons and an example. Avoid grammar mistakes (use 'interested in', 'a news' → 'news', 'at least once a week', 'my family') and filler words like 'umm'. Keep within 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I am interested in news because it helps me stay informed about local and global events. For example, I read online news about technology and education at least once a week to keep up with developments that affect my studies.

Suggestion: Answer directly: state the main ways you find news (e.g., online, newspapers, social media), then give a brief specific detail about frequency or a platform. Use clear vocabulary and correct grammar (e.g., 'I read newspapers', 'I use social networks', 'every day'). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I usually find news online through news websites and social media, and I also read a printed newspaper once a week. I check news apps on my phone every morning to see the headlines.

Suggestion: Start with a clear yes/no response, then give a concise reason and a supporting detail. Use correct structures: 'I am not interested in writing news' or 'I prefer studying my major'. Avoid repetitions and fillers. Keep to 2 sentences.

Example: No, I would not like to be a journalist because I am not interested in writing news articles. I prefer to focus on my major, which I find more rewarding and relevant to my career goals.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer (Yes/No) and give a specific reason or detail about timing. Use correct expressions: 'I didn't read the news this morning because I was busy preparing for...' Avoid unclear phrasing and fillers. Keep to one or two sentences.

Example: No, I didn't read the news this morning because I was busy preparing for a class presentation. I usually read headlines later in the day when I have time.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a specific example. Start with frequency ('Yes, I often...') then mention a recent topic and why it was discussed. Use clearer grammar ('exchange rate of the pound') and link sentences with words like 'for example' or 'recently'. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I often discuss the news with my friends, usually about once a week. For example, my friend Johnny and I recently talked about the exchange rate of the pound and how it affects travel and prices.

× As news is really interested so I usually read a news at least to once a week when my families.

✓ Because news is really interesting, I usually read the news at least once a week with my family.

The adjective 'interested' is incorrect; 'interesting' describes something that interests you. 'a news' is wrong because 'news' is uncountable and takes no article; use 'the news'. 'to once a week' has incorrect word order; say 'once a week'. 'when my families' is incorrect: use 'with my family' to indicate togetherness.

× It gives a lots of umm information for me.

✓ It gives a lot of useful information for me.

'a lots of' is incorrect; the correct form is 'a lot of' or 'lots of'. 'information' is uncountable so use 'a lot of information'. Adding an adjective like 'useful' clarifies meaning.

× Jolly lead a newspaper with paper at least once a week and warm.

✓ I usually read a paper or an online newspaper at least once a week, depending on the weather.

The original sentence has confused word order and unclear vocabulary ('Jolly lead', 'and warm'). I restructured it to a clear subject-verb-object pattern and provided plausible meaning: 'read a paper or an online newspaper' and 'depending on the weather' if 'warm' referred to conditions. If 'warm' was not intended, remove that clause.

× I usually read umm social network can use uh. Read umm every day.

✓ I usually use social networks and read news on them every day.

Pronoun and clause structure were incorrect. 'social network can use' is ungrammatical. The corrected sentence uses 'use social networks' and clarifies that news is read on them 'every day'.

× That is because I I don't interested in writing a news or something.

✓ That is because I am not interested in writing news or similar things.

Use the adjectival 'interested' with the verb 'to be' ('am not interested'). 'a news' is incorrect because 'news' is uncountable; remove the article. 'or something' is vague; 'or similar things' is clearer.

× I just really enjoy my major more deeply so I don't uh.

✓ I just really enjoy my major more, so I don't want to be a journalist.

Original sentence is incomplete and uses 'so I don't uh' which is a fragment. Specify the intended action: 'so I don't want to be a journalist.' This completes the thought and fits the context.

× Really, that is because I. Don't describe a paper news and in the morning I really busy for my prepare umm others like.

✓ No, because I don't read printed newspapers, and in the morning I am usually very busy preparing for other things.

The original is fragmented and has incorrect verbs and articles. 'describe a paper news' is meaningless; likely meant 'read paper news'. Use 'I am usually very busy preparing for other things' for grammatical correctness and clarity.

× As I usually talk about news at least once a week, when my best friend Johnny, for example, recently we talked about exchange of pound.

✓ I usually talk about the news at least once a week with my best friend Johnny; for example, recently we talked about the exchange rate of the pound.

The sentence had incorrect conjunction and clause punctuation. 'As' at the start and 'when my best friend' created a fragment. Also 'exchange of pound' is ungrammatical; use 'exchange rate of the pound' or 'pound exchange rate'. I rejoined clauses correctly using a semicolon and clarified the noun phrase.