Sharing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and natural.

Example: Yes, my parents always encouraged me to share because they believe it is an important part of life. For example, they taught me to share not only with family but also with friends, which helped me build strong relationships.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Make sure to use complete sentences and correct prepositions. Also, provide specific examples and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: I usually share my keyboards, shows, and books with my friends because sharing helps us build a strong bond. For instance, I often lend my favorite books to them.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more natural expressions and providing a bit more detail. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'many trust issues between people' and explain your feelings more specifically.

Example: Yes, I prefer not to share personal things like my stories and family problems because I find it hard to trust others with sensitive information.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and clearly express your opinion. Use linking words to explain your reasoning and provide specific examples if possible.

Example: Yes, I think more people will share cars in my country because it is common for friends to exchange cars. This helps save money and reduces traffic congestion.

× You got this one day.

✓ You got this once.

The phrase 'You got this one day' is unclear and awkward. 'One day' usually refers to a future time, but here it seems to mean 'once' or 'at some point'. Replacing 'one day' with 'once' clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× We definitely.

✓ We definitely did.

'We definitely' is an incomplete sentence lacking a verb. Adding 'did' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× My parents always encouraged me to share everything because they believe sharing is the part and parcel of our life.

✓ My parents always encouraged me to share everything because they believe sharing is a part and parcel of our life.

The phrase 'the part and parcel' should be 'a part and parcel' because it refers to one of many parts. Also, 'life' is singular and correct here. The verb 'believe' agrees with plural subject 'they' and is correct.

× Moreover, they taught me to share not only with family but also with my friends, which helped me build great relationship.

✓ Moreover, they taught me to share not only with family but also with my friends, which helped me build great relationships.

The noun 'relationship' should be plural 'relationships' because it refers to multiple connections with friends.

× I really like to share with my friends because I think it helps to build great bond with us.

✓ I really like to share with my friends because I think it helps build a great bond between us.

The phrase 'build great bond with us' is incorrect. It should be 'build a great bond between us' to correctly express the relationship.

× Most of the time.

✓ Most of the time,

'Most of the time.' is a sentence fragment. Adding a comma connects it to the following sentence for clarity.

× I usually like to share of my keyboards, my shows and my books.

✓ I usually like to share my keyboards, my shoes, and my books.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect here. The verb 'share' should be followed directly by the object without 'of'. Also, 'shows' is likely a typo for 'shoes'.

× Yes, I do not like to share my personal things such as my own stories and my family problems because I have many trust issues between people.

✓ Yes, I do not like to share my personal things such as my own stories and my family problems because I have many trust issues with people.

The phrase 'trust issues between people' is incorrect. It should be 'trust issues with people' to indicate difficulty trusting others.

× I think in my country. Shooting car is the common because in my country every people exchange their cars with their friends.

✓ I think in my country, car sharing is common because in my country, every person exchanges their car with their friends.

'Shooting car' is incorrect; it should be 'car sharing'. 'Every people' is incorrect; it should be 'every person'. Also, 'exchanges' agrees with singular 'every person'. 'Cars' should be singular 'car' to match 'every person'.

× Be 'cause.

✓ Because.

'Be 'cause' is a misspelling and incorrect form of 'because'. Correcting it to 'Because.' fixes the error.