Sharing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意动词时态和主谓一致，避免使用不准确的词汇，如“surely belongs with others”。同时，回答应更简洁明了，避免冗余。

Example: Yes, my parents encouraged me to share with others when I was young. They not only told me to share but also set a good example by sharing their own belongings.

Suggestion: 回答中有重复词汇（"good, good"）和不恰当的词汇（"contingent"），建议使用准确且相关的词汇表达情感，并避免重复。

Example: I usually share food and drinks with my friends. Besides that, I like to share my positive feelings and emotions because it helps strengthen our friendship.

Suggestion: 回答不完整且有语法错误，句子未完成。建议完整表达观点，注意句子结构和语法，避免句子中断。

Example: I prefer not to share my financial situation and political views because they are sensitive topics. Also, I usually keep my personal belongings private to avoid any misunderstandings.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，如“more cost, more saving cost”和“protect environmental environment”。建议使用正确的表达方式，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Example: In the past, car sharing was not very popular, but nowadays it is becoming more accepted because it saves money and helps protect the environment.

× Yes, when I was young my parents always encourage me to surely belongs with others that not only just to share with fans but also set a good example by sharing their own possessions.

✓ Yes, when I was young my parents always encouraged me to surely belong with others, not only to share with friends but also to set a good example by sharing their own possessions.

句子中描述过去的习惯动作，动词应使用过去时态。'encourage'应改为'encouraged'，'belongs'应改为'belong'，'fans'应为'friends'。此外，句子结构不清晰，调整为更通顺的表达。

× Yes, when I was young my parents always encourage me to surely belongs with others that not only just to share with fans but also set a good example by sharing their own possessions.

✓ Yes, when I was young my parents always encouraged me to surely belong with others, not only to share with friends but also to set a good example by sharing their own possessions.

'fans'应为复数形式'friends'，表示朋友。

× I usually share some foods or drinks with my friends and I also share my feelings and good, good and positive emotions with others.

✓ I usually share some food or drinks with my friends and I also share my feelings and good, positive emotions with others.

'foods'通常用作不可数名词，表示食物总称，应使用单数形式'food'。

× I usually share some foods or drinks with my friends and I also share my feelings and good, good and positive emotions with others.

✓ I usually share some food or drinks with my friends and I also share my feelings and good, positive emotions with others.

'good, good and positive emotions'中重复使用'good'，应去掉重复部分，保持表达简洁。

× I think it's a good contingent.

✓ I think it's a good habit.

'contingent'用法不当，意思不符合语境，应使用'habit'表示习惯。

× I think is some of these things are too sensitive to discuss with fans.

✓ I think some of these things are too sensitive to discuss with friends.

句子中多余的'is'导致结构错误，应删除。'fans'应为'friends'。

× Additionally, I also don't want to share my personal belongings because the.

✓ Additionally, I also don't want to share my personal belongings because of that.

句子不完整，缺少原因说明，补充'of that'使句子完整。

× I think in the past maybe it's not popular, but in nowadays I think it's being accepted by the public because it's more cost, more saving cost and protect environmental environment.

✓ I think in the past maybe it wasn't popular, but nowadays I think it's being accepted by the public because it costs less, saves more money, and protects the environment.

'in nowadays'用法错误，应为'normally'或直接用'normally'。'more cost, more saving cost'表达不准确，改为'costs less, saves more money'。'protect environmental environment'重复，应为'protects the environment'。