Sharing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: ควรลดการใช้คำเติมเสียง "uh" ที่ไม่จำเป็น และใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง เช่น ใช้ 'taught me to share' แทน 'teach me to sharing' เพื่อให้คำตอบดูเป็นธรรมชาติและชัดเจนมากขึ้น

Example: Yes, definitely. When I was a child, my parents always taught me to share with others, especially with my siblings. As the oldest, I was expected to set a good example by sharing more.

Suggestion: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำ เช่น 'share food with others or my siblings' และอธิบายเหตุผลให้ชัดเจนโดยใช้ linking words เพื่อความลื่นไหลของคำตอบ

Example: I like to share food with others, especially my siblings. When we have dinner together, sharing food helps us spend quality time as a family.

Suggestion: ควรใช้ประโยคที่กระชับและชัดเจนมากขึ้น พร้อมใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด เช่น 'In my opinion, personal belongings such as bras or underwear are not suitable for sharing'

Example: In my opinion, personal belongings are not suitable for sharing. For example, items like bras or underwear should be kept private.

Suggestion: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'I always share food with my colleagues' และอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน พร้อมใช้ linking words เพื่อความลื่นไหล

Example: Yes, I often share food with my colleagues at the office because we have many friends there. Sharing food helps build good relationships.

Suggestion: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้อง เช่น 'I would like to share good news with my family first because they are my priority' และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำเติมเสียงที่ไม่จำเป็น

Example: If I have good news, I would like to share it with my family first because they are my top priority.

Suggestion: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจน เช่น 'I share various kinds of news with my friends, especially funny news that makes us laugh and feel happy' และลดการใช้คำเติมเสียง

Example: I share different kinds of news with my friends, especially funny stories that make us laugh and feel good.

× my parents, uh, always teach me to sharing, uh, to other people or to sharing, uh, to my brotherhood.

✓ my parents always taught me to share with other people or with my siblings.

The verb 'teach' should be in past tense 'taught' to match the past time frame. Also, 'to sharing' is incorrect; after 'teach me to', the base form 'share' should be used, not the '-ing' form.

× to other people or to sharing, uh, to my brotherhood.

✓ to other people or to my siblings.

The word 'brotherhood' is incorrect here; the plural noun 'siblings' is appropriate to refer to brothers and sisters.

× Uh, so I'm the oldest, I have to more sharing and.

✓ Since I'm the oldest, I have to share more.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'I have to more sharing' is incorrect; it should be 'I have to share more' to express obligation and quantity properly.

× I'd like to share, uh, the food to, to others or to my sibling because the food, umm, when we have dinner together, so we have to sharing our quality time spent with my family.

✓ I'd like to share food with others or my siblings because when we have dinner together, we share quality time with my family.

'To share the food to' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'share food with'. Also, 'we have to sharing' is incorrect; it should be 'we share' or 'we spend' to describe the action.

× I'd like to share, uh, the food to, to others or to my sibling

✓ I'd like to share food with others or my siblings

The verb 'share' is followed by 'with' when indicating the person receiving something, not 'to'.

× to my sibling

✓ to my siblings

The singular 'sibling' should be plural 'siblings' to match the context of sharing with more than one person.

× In my opinion, uh, The thing is not suitable to share for sharing, I think umm, uh, that is personal. Belonging, uh, for example, uh, bra or underwear.

✓ In my opinion, some things are not suitable for sharing, such as personal belongings like bras or underwear.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'The thing is not suitable to share for sharing' is incorrect; it should be 'some things are not suitable for sharing'. Also, 'personal belonging' should be plural 'personal belongings'.

× personal. Belonging

✓ personal belongings

The noun 'belonging' should be plural 'belongings' when referring to multiple personal items.

× Yes, I always sharing, uh, food to my colleagues, uh, because in office room, so we have uh, too many friends, I like to share food or dessert, uh, to them.

✓ Yes, I always share food with my colleagues because in the office, we have many friends. I like to share food or dessert with them.

'I always sharing' is incorrect; it should be 'I always share'. Also, 'food to my colleagues' should be 'food with my colleagues'. The phrase 'too many friends' is awkward here; 'many friends' is better.

× food to my colleagues

✓ food with my colleagues

The verb 'share' is followed by 'with' when indicating the person receiving something, not 'to'.

× because in office room, so we have uh, too many friends

✓ because in the office, we have many friends

The phrase 'in office room' is incorrect; it should be 'in the office'. Also, 'too many friends' implies excessiveness which may not be intended; 'many friends' is more appropriate.

× If I have, uh, something good news, I'd like to share to my family because priority, uh, in my life is family.

✓ If I have good news, I'd like to share it with my family because my priority in life is family.

'Share to my family' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'share with my family'. Also, 'something good news' is incorrect; 'good news' is uncountable and does not need 'something'.

× If I have, uh, something good news

✓ If I have good news

'News' is an uncountable noun and does not require 'something' before it.

× If I got, uh, good new, it's probably my family is well, uh, no, the first.

✓ If I get good news, my family is probably the first to know.

'Good new' should be 'good news'. Also, the sentence structure is unclear; it should be rephrased to express that family is the first to know.

× Uh, I have several moments and several news I sharing everything to them.

✓ I have several moments and news that I share with them.

'I sharing' is incorrect; it should be 'I share'. Also, 'several news' is incorrect because 'news' is uncountable; 'some news' or just 'news' is better.

× I sharing everything to them.

✓ I share everything with them.

The verb 'share' is followed by 'with' when indicating the person receiving something, not 'to'.

× especially the joke news make me a make me unfriend laughing and happy, uh, making feel good.

✓ Especially jokes make me and my friends laugh and feel happy, which makes me feel good.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Joke news' is unclear; 'jokes' is better. 'Make me a make me unfriend laughing' is incorrect; it should be 'make me and my friends laugh'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.