Sharing— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Did your parents teach you to share when you were a child?
Candidate
Yes, my parent teachers sharing is important for us to connect relationship with others especially for friends. We should share cakes or good things with our friends that were helpful for our relationship better.
Examiner
What kind of things do you like to share with others?
Candidate
I purport to share food with others. For example, when I have a big cake or some cookies, I will share it for with my friends. That will let me let my friends feel happy as well as I'm ever happy too.
Examiner
What kind of things are not suitable for sharing?
Candidate
I think that must be answer. If you are in a exam, you should not share your answer with others. If you do it, that's very terrible.
Examiner
Do you have anything to share with others recently?
Candidate
Yes, last weekend I share a big cake with my friends because that's my birthday. My parents book a cake for me and I share my cake and my happiness with others make me feel more happy.
Examiner
Who is the first person you would like to share good news with?
Candidate
That must be my parents because I trust my parents very much. So if I have some good news I will share with them and they also gave me some useful advice about it.
Examiner
What kind of news do you share with your friends?
Candidate
Umm, I will choose some good news because umm, good news make me happy. I should. I want to share the happiness to others, make them feel happy too. Inside of some bad news. The bad news will be anxious to everyone that's better, that's that's terrible.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Did your parents teach you to share when you were a child?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 你的回答有语法错误，表达不够自然，且句子结构较复杂。建议使用简单明了的句子，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。
Example: Yes, my parents taught me to share when I was a child. They said sharing helps build good relationships, especially with friends. For example, we often shared snacks at school to make friends happy.
What kind of things do you like to share with others?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中有用词错误和语法问题，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的词汇和句型，表达清晰且自然。
Example: I like to share food with others. For example, when I have a big cake or some cookies, I share them with my friends. Sharing food makes both me and my friends feel happy.
What kind of things are not suitable for sharing?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答不够完整且表达不自然。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并解释原因。
Example: I think exam answers are not suitable for sharing. Sharing answers during an exam is cheating and is very wrong.
Do you have anything to share with others recently?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中时态使用不当，句子结构不够清晰。建议注意时态一致，句子简洁明了。
Example: Yes, last weekend I shared a big cake with my friends because it was my birthday. My parents bought the cake, and sharing it made me feel very happy.
Who is the first person you would like to share good news with?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答较好，但句子连接稍显生硬。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Example: The first person I would like to share good news with is my parents because I trust them very much. When I share good news, they often give me useful advice.
What kind of news do you share with your friends?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答不连贯，语法和表达有较多错误。建议简化句子，清晰表达观点，避免重复和犹豫词。
Example: I usually share good news with my friends because it makes me happy. I want to share happiness and make them feel happy too. I prefer not to share bad news because it can make people anxious.
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