Sharing— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Did your parents teach you to share when you were a child?
Candidate
Yes, my parents always told me that sharing was very important. They believed it could build better relationship with others. What's more, they told me that sharing was a generous personality which could benefit to my future career.
Examiner
What kind of things do you like to share with others?
Candidate
I often share some physical items with people I trust. For example, my best friend and I always exchange clothes with each other, which can strengthen our relationship.
Examiner
What kind of things are not suitable for sharing?
Candidate
I think personal relationships are not suitable for sharing because my friends are very important to me, so I will feel upset if they have a better relationship than me. For example, I think my boyfriend is not suitable to share with others.
Examiner
Do you have anything to share with others recently?
Candidate
Recently I shared a delicate collectible with my friend. She knows I like collecting unique items very much, so my friends thought one of them was very interesting.
Examiner
Who is the first person you would like to share good news with?
Candidate
Definitely my best friend because she always supports and encourages me in many ways and I think my achievements are largely owing to her, so I want to share every good news to her.
Examiner
What kind of news do you share with your friends?
Candidate
I usually prefer to share positive news with my friends because they will praise me if I perform well. However, I'll tend to keep bad news to myself because I want to avoid making them feel worried.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Did your parents teach you to share when you were a child?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，如“build better relationship”应为“build better relationships”，“sharing was a generous personality”表达不准确。建议注意语法和表达的准确性，避免直译。
Example: Yes, my parents always taught me that sharing is very important because it helps build better relationships with others. They also said that being generous can benefit my future career.
What kind of things do you like to share with others?
Score: 85.0Suggestion: 回答较好，但可以增加更多细节和连接词，使表达更连贯自然。
Example: I often share physical items with people I trust. For instance, my best friend and I frequently exchange clothes, which helps strengthen our friendship.
What kind of things are not suitable for sharing?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 表达中逻辑不够清晰，且“personal relationships are not suitable for sharing”表述不自然。建议更明确地说明原因，并使用更自然的表达。
Example: I believe personal relationships should not be shared because they are private and important to me. For example, I wouldn't share details about my boyfriend with others.
Do you have anything to share with others recently?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“so my friends thought one of them was very interesting”逻辑不明。建议理清句子结构，表达更准确。
Example: Recently, I shared a delicate collectible with my friend. Since she knows I enjoy collecting unique items, she found it very interesting.
Who is the first person you would like to share good news with?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: 回答内容丰富，但句子较长且有语法错误，如“share every good news to her”应为“share every piece of good news with her”。建议简化句子并注意介词使用。
Example: Definitely my best friend, because she always supports and encourages me. I believe many of my achievements are thanks to her, so I like to share all my good news with her.
What kind of news do you share with your friends?
Score: 85.0Suggestion: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
Example: I usually prefer to share positive news with my friends because they praise me when I do well. However, I tend to keep bad news to myself to avoid worrying them.
Grammar
× They believed it could build better relationship with others.
✓ They believed it could build better relationships with others.
relationship 是可数名词，表示关系，复数形式是 relationships。这里指多种关系，应该用复数形式。
× sharing was a generous personality which could benefit to my future career.
✓ sharing was a generous personality trait which could benefit my future career.
generous 是形容词，不能直接修饰 personality，应该用 personality trait 表示“性格特征”。benefit 后面不需要介词 to。
× which could benefit to my future career.
✓ which could benefit my future career.
动词 benefit 后面不需要介词 to，直接加宾语。
× my friends thought one of them was very interesting.
✓ my friend thought one of them was very interesting.
前文提到的是单数 friend，这里应保持一致，使用单数 friend。
× so I want to share every good news to her.
✓ so I want to share every good news with her.
动词 share 后面搭配介词 with 表示“与某人分享”，不能用 to。
× share every good news to her.
✓ share every piece of good news with her.
news 是不可数名词，不能用 every 修饰，应该用 every piece of news 表示“每一条新闻”。
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