Movies— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and coherent by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. For example, instead of saying 'whenever I have a big day of then I try to entertain myself', you can say 'whenever I have a busy day, I like to relax by watching movies.' Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

Example: I usually watch movies on weekends. Whenever I have a busy day, I like to relax by watching movies to entertain myself.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains some confusing phrases. Try to directly answer the question with clear examples and avoid unclear terms like 'music movies' or 'The John Rhe'. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: I usually watch a variety of movies, including horror and comedy. I enjoy both genres because they offer different experiences; horror movies are thrilling, while comedies are light-hearted and fun.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but needs better structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid sentence fragments. Also, correct the movie name and provide a clear reason for your preference.

Example: I prefer watching entertaining movies at the cinema because of the big screen and sound. However, I watch intellectual movies at home since they require more concentration. For example, Inception starring Leonardo DiCaprio is a great movie that I enjoyed watching at home.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. Avoid repetition and explain your points with linking words for coherence.

Example: I think watching movies in other languages is useful because, with subtitles, you can learn basic greetings and phrases. For instance, the Spanish series Narcos helped me understand the language better while enjoying the story.

× And whenever I have a big day of then I try to entertain myself by watching movies.

✓ And whenever I have a big day, I try to entertain myself by watching movies.

The original sentence has a sentence structure error due to the phrase 'of then' which is incorrect and confusing. Removing 'of then' and adding a comma after 'day' corrects the sentence structure and improves clarity.

× There are a wide variety of music movies that I like.

✓ There is a wide variety of movies that I like.

The phrase 'music movies' is incorrect; likely the student meant 'movies'. Also, 'variety' is singular, so 'There is' should be used instead of 'There are'. This corrects the adjective use and subject-verb agreement.

× Some of them are horror and other ones are comedy.

✓ Some of them are horror movies and others are comedies.

The words 'horror' and 'comedy' are used as nouns but need to be pluralized or specified as 'movies' to be correct. 'Other ones' is better replaced with 'others' for conciseness.

× So the mixture of both move both.

✓ So I like a mixture of both genres.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Rephrasing it to 'I like a mixture of both genres' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× The John Rhe is what I like to watch.

✓ The John Wick series is what I like to watch.

'John Rhe' seems to be a misspelling or incorrect reference. Assuming the student meant 'John Wick', the sentence is corrected accordingly. Also, specifying 'series' clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer watching interesting movies at cinemas and some of the intellectual movies at home becaused.

✓ I prefer watching interesting movies at the cinema and some intellectual movies at home because

The preposition 'at cinemas' should be 'at the cinema' for general preference. 'Becaused' is a typo and should be 'because'. Also, 'some of the intellectual movies' is better as 'some intellectual movies' for natural phrasing.

× Intellectual movies. Require a concentration that I don't get in cinema halls, for example.

✓ Intellectual movies require concentration that I don't get in cinema halls, for example.

The original has a sentence fragment 'Intellectual movies.' which should be combined with the next sentence for correct structure.

× Enter Ception was a great movie.

✓ Inception was a great movie.

'Enter Ception' is a misspelling of 'Inception'. Correcting the spelling fixes the sentence.

× Inception and Leonardo DiCaprio great job.

✓ Inception and Leonardo DiCaprio did a great job.

The sentence lacks a verb. Adding 'did' corrects the sentence structure.

× With some subtitles you can watch movies in other languages and you will get to know how they greet in their language and what kind of basic languages you learn from watching them.

✓ With some subtitles, you can watch movies in other languages and learn how they greet in their language and what kind of basic language you can learn from watching them.

The phrase 'get to know how they greet' is better expressed as 'learn how they greet'. Also, 'basic languages' should be 'basic language' to refer to the language being learned.

× Like Narcos is in Spanish but the with the help of subtitles you can watch it fully.

✓ For example, Narcos is in Spanish, but with the help of subtitles, you can watch it fully.

The sentence is missing proper connectors and has an extra 'the'. Adding 'For example' and removing 'the' before 'with' improves sentence flow and correctness.