E-books— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. Try to use correct verb forms and articles, and avoid redundancy. Also, limit your answer to about 4-5 sentences for conciseness. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I prefer electronic books over paper books because they are very convenient and save time. Also, I can read them anywhere and anytime online. Additionally, e-books are lightweight and environmentally friendly, which makes them a practical choice for me.

Suggestion: Your answer has some good ideas but is disorganized and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question. Use linking words like 'because' or 'when' to connect ideas. Avoid repeating phrases and keep sentences concise and clear.

Example: I usually read books online when I travel by bus or train because it helps me pass the time. Reading online is also a great source of entertainment during my trips. I enjoy both online and paper books.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has many grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to form complete sentences and use correct verb tenses. Also, explain your reasons clearly and use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas logically.

Example: No, I will not read more online in the future because it can harm our eyes. I am very conscious about my eye health, so I prefer reading from paper books instead.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors that make it difficult to understand. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use specific examples. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure to express your thoughts effectively.

Example: I like to read various things online, such as informative articles about society, the latest news, and topics related to health and fitness. Reading online is very convenient for accessing this information.

Suggestion: Your answer is very unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to form complete sentences and clearly explain the differences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific reasons.

Example: Reading online is different from reading paper books because it can be harder on the eyes. For example, staring at a screen for a long time can cause eye strain, which does not happen as much with paper books.

× I pray for electronic books rather than paper books becauses there very convenient and save time.

✓ I prefer electronic books rather than paper books because they are very convenient and save time.

The word 'pray' is incorrectly used instead of 'prefer'. Also, 'there' should be 'they' to correctly refer to 'electronic books'. 'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. Correct pronoun usage is essential for clarity.

× Moreover, I can read books online anywhere at any time apart from this.

✓ Moreover, I can read books online anywhere at any time besides this.

The phrase 'apart from this' is awkward here; 'besides this' or 'in addition to this' fits better. However, this is more about word choice than grammar problem type, so minimal correction is applied.

× E-books are very lightweight an environment friendly, making them a practical choice for me.

✓ E-books are very lightweight and environmentally friendly, making them a practical choice for me.

The phrase 'an environment friendly' is incorrect; it should be 'environmentally friendly' as an adverb modifying 'friendly'. Also, 'an' should be 'and' to connect the two adjectives.

× Technology is progressing by leaps and bound and I usually read books online when I traveled by bus or train, which helps me.

✓ Technology is progressing by leaps and bounds and I usually read books online when I travel by bus or train, which helps me.

The phrase 'leaps and bound' should be 'leaps and bounds' (plural). Also, 'traveled' is past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'travel'.

× To pass the time and it is also it is a really great source of entertainment in traveling.

✓ It helps to pass the time and is also a really great source of entertainment while traveling.

The original sentence is fragmented and redundant. Combining the ideas into a single coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, in the future I will not read more online becauses.

✓ No, in the future I will not read more online because.

'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. Correct spelling is necessary for clarity.

× It directly effects on our eyes and.

✓ It directly affects our eyes.

'Effects' is a noun; the correct verb form is 'affects'. Also, 'on' is unnecessary after 'affects'.

× I'm very hard conscious, so I do not.

✓ I'm very health conscious, so I do not.

'Hard conscious' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'health conscious' meaning aware of health issues.

× I will not read online. I will prefer. To read from books.

✓ I will not read online. I will prefer to read from books.

The sentence is fragmented; 'I will prefer.' and 'To read from books.' should be combined into one sentence for proper structure.

× Reading online is very convenient and. Did are many or numerous things which I like to read online such as knowledgeable things out later to our society and new some new news is and overrated over health and body or whatever.

✓ Reading online is very convenient and there are many things I like to read online such as informative content about our society, news, health, body, and more.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains many errors including incorrect word choice and structure. The correction provides a clear, grammatically correct sentence conveying the intended meaning.

× Reading online is. Really. Difficult from paper becaused.

✓ Reading online is really different from paper because.

'Difficult from paper' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'different from paper'. Also, 'becaused' is a misspelling of 'because'.

× If I remove some online it back very bad if I burn my eyes.

✓ If I read online for too long, it hurts my eyes badly.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. The correction clarifies the intended meaning with proper sentence structure and vocabulary.