E-books— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'I can I California'. Also, keep your answer concise and clear by limiting to 4-5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I generally prefer paper books because I love the smell and find it easier to concentrate when reading them. However, I often use e-books nowadays since they allow me to access information quickly and conveniently.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure by combining short sentences and using linking words. Also, be careful with verb forms, e.g., 'listening' should be 'listen'.

Example: I usually read online during my lunch breaks at work or after I return home. While having lunch or coffee, I scroll through e-books or listen to audiobooks to relax.

Suggestion: Good content and structure. To improve, use more precise vocabulary and avoid repetitive phrases like 'very huge pace'.

Example: Yes, I expect to read more online in the future because digitalization is advancing rapidly, and paper books are becoming less popular as many are converted into e-books.

Suggestion: Avoid informal phrases like 'et cetera' and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a clear, complete explanation.

Example: I enjoy reading sports articles online because they keep me updated on my team's performance, player injuries, and transfer news. For example, I subscribe to The Athletic, which offers excellent football journalism.

Suggestion: Avoid starting sentences with 'Like' in formal speech. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific details to support your points.

Example: Reading online differs from reading on paper in several ways. For instance, staring at a screen for a long time can cause eye strain, which does not happen with paper books. Additionally, many people find it easier to concentrate when reading on paper.

× I generally prefer paper books to ebooks.

✓ I generally prefer paper books to e-books.

The word 'ebooks' should be hyphenated as 'e-books' to correctly represent the term for electronic books.

× That's because I love the smell of paper and also I feel that I can I California I am able to concentrate more when I use paper books.

✓ That's because I love the smell of paper and also I feel that I am able to concentrate more when I use paper books.

The phrase 'I can I California' is incorrect and appears to be a typographical error. It should be removed to maintain sentence clarity and correctness.

× Usually during lunch breaks.

✓ Usually, during lunch breaks,

The phrase 'Usually during lunch breaks.' is a sentence fragment lacking a verb. It should be connected to the previous or following sentence or restructured to form a complete sentence.

× I used to take out my mobile and scroll through ebooks when I am having my lunch and when I am back from work I just have another cup of coffee and while I have my coffee I scroll through ebooks or listening to audiobooks as well.

✓ I used to take out my mobile and scroll through e-books when I was having my lunch, and when I was back from work, I just had another cup of coffee, and while I had my coffee, I scrolled through e-books or listened to audiobooks as well.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. Since 'used to' indicates past habits, the verbs should be in the past tense to maintain consistency.

× The Athletic is a very good source of football journalism they have in.

✓ The Athletic is a very good source of football journalism they have.

The phrase 'they have in' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Removing it improves sentence clarity and correctness.

× Reading online I would say is different from reading on paper in some ways.

✓ I would say reading online is different from reading on paper in some ways.

The original sentence has awkward word order. Reordering the sentence improves clarity and flow.

× Like if you constantly stare at the screen while reading ebook it can lead to eye strain.

✓ For example, if you constantly stare at the screen while reading an e-book, it can lead to eye strain.

The sentence lacks the article 'an' before 'e-book' and 'Like' is informal and unclear here. Replacing 'Like' with 'For example' and adding 'an' improves correctness.