E-books— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, 'staging for the words' is unclear; perhaps you meant 'storing' or 'annotating'. Also, try to avoid run-on sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I prefer reading e-books because features like highlighting and annotating make my reading more efficient. However, I sometimes read paper books because I am accustomed to them.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but could be more grammatically accurate and natural. Use correct verb forms and prepositions, and try to avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: I usually read online when studying at university because my professors require us to access materials through an online system called Moodle.

Suggestion: Your answer contains many hesitations and unclear phrases. Try to speak more fluently and clearly. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Also, improve sentence structure and clarity by using linking words and precise vocabulary.

Example: Yes, I believe reading habits will change dramatically in the near future because smartphone apps and AI technologies will transform how we access and consume information.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains many hesitations and unclear expressions. Try to speak more confidently and use precise vocabulary. Also, avoid unnecessary filler words and improve sentence flow with linking words.

Example: I enjoy reading Japanese manga online because many companies provide a wide range of content. For example, I often read famous series like Dragon Ball and One Piece.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'pay share them through much area'. Use linking words to explain differences logically.

Example: I think reading online differs from paper reading mainly in terms of efficiency because online materials can be easily shared and accessed from various devices.

× I prefer reading ebooks because functions such as highlighting or staging for the words is very useful which makes my reading a much more efficient, but as I sometimes read the paper books because I'm used to it.

✓ I prefer reading ebooks because functions such as highlighting or staging the words are very useful, which makes my reading much more efficient, but I sometimes read paper books because I'm used to them.

The verb 'staging' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'staging the words' or better 'staging' should be replaced with a more appropriate verb like 'storing' or 'saving'. Also, 'functions' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'A much more efficient' is incorrect because 'efficient' is an adjective and needs a noun; it should be 'much more efficient' without 'a'. 'The paper books' should be 'paper books' without 'the' as it refers to books in general. 'I'm used to it' should be 'I'm used to them' because 'books' is plural.

× I usually read books through online because I am studying in the university right now and professors wants students to read some materials through online system called Moodle.

✓ I usually read books online because I am studying at the university right now and professors want students to read some materials through an online system called Moodle.

The verb 'wants' does not agree with the plural subject 'professors'; it should be 'want'. 'Through online' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'online' without 'through'. 'In the university' should be 'at the university' as the correct preposition for institutions. 'Online system' needs an article 'an' before it.

× Yes, I think the habits of reading will change dramatically in the near future because, umm, smartphone apps and, uh, AI can make it uh, different, uh, from the that's in the past years.

✓ Yes, I think the habits of reading will change dramatically in the near future because, umm, smartphone apps and, uh, AI can make it, uh, different from what it was in past years.

The phrase 'from the that's in the past years' is ungrammatical and unclear. It should be 'from what it was in past years' to correctly compare the present and past. Also, 'the habits of reading' is acceptable but 'reading habits' is more natural.

× I prefer reading umm, Japanese manga because uh, we can get uh, many contents uh, in the page owned by umm, companies, so I sometimes uh, read notable masterpieces such as Dragon Ball and One Piece.

✓ I prefer reading, umm, Japanese manga because, uh, we can get, uh, much content, uh, on pages owned by, umm, companies, so I sometimes, uh, read notable masterpieces such as Dragon Ball and One Piece.

'Many contents' is incorrect because 'content' is an uncountable noun; 'much content' is correct. 'In the page' should be 'on pages' because content is accessed on pages, and 'pages' is plural here. The article 'the' before 'page' is unnecessary. Commas are added for clarity.

× I think reading online is a different from what it is in the paper, especially in the perspective of efficiency because we can pay share them through much area when reading.

✓ I think reading online is different from reading on paper, especially in terms of efficiency, because we can share them widely when reading.

The phrase 'is a different from what it is in the paper' is ungrammatical; it should be 'is different from reading on paper'. 'In the perspective of efficiency' should be 'in terms of efficiency'. 'Pay share them through much area' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'share them widely'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammaticality.