E-books— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, for example, say "I prefer paper books because reading on a screen for a long time causes eye strain and discomfort." Also, avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure.

Example: I prefer paper books because reading on screens for a long time causes eye strain and discomfort to my eyes.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. For example, "I usually read online during class because the teacher assigns articles and materials that we need to read. However, I find it uncomfortable for my eyes."

Example: I usually read online during class because the teacher assigns articles and materials that we need to read. However, I find it uncomfortable for my eyes after a while.

Suggestion: Your answer is fragmented and has grammatical mistakes. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "I probably won't read more online in the future because, although it is convenient, reading on screens for a long time causes eye strain and discomfort."

Example: I probably won't read more online in the future because, although it is convenient, reading on screens for a long time causes eye strain and discomfort.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to be more specific and use correct sentence structure. For example, "I like to read news online every day, especially about entertainment and finance, using news apps like ABC News."

Example: I like to read news online every day, especially about entertainment and finance, using news apps like ABC News.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more coherent. Use linking words and correct vocabulary. For example, "Reading online is more convenient because most people have mobile phones, and you can adjust the font size, which is helpful for elderly people and children."

Example: Reading online is more convenient because most people have mobile phones, and you can adjust the font size, which is helpful for elderly people and children.

× I would prefer paper books because I don't like the version reading.

✓ I would prefer paper books because I don't like reading the version.

The phrase 'version reading' is incorrect because 'reading' should directly follow 'like' as a gerund to indicate the activity. The correct form is 'like reading the version.'

× When I when I reading long time on a screen I my my eyes is uncomfortable because I think it caused the eye strain.

✓ When I read for a long time on a screen, my eyes feel uncomfortable because I think it causes eye strain.

The phrase 'when I reading' is incorrect; the verb should be in base form 'read' after 'when I.' Also, 'my eyes is' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; it should be 'my eyes feel.' 'Caused' should be present tense 'causes' to match the present context.

× When I when I reading long time on a screen I my my eyes is uncomfortable because I think it caused the eye strain.

✓ When I read for a long time on a screen, my eyes feel uncomfortable because I think it causes eye strain.

The sentence has repeated words and lacks proper structure. Removing repetitions and restructuring improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually read online when in the class because the teacher will often assign some article and materials for us to us, so we need to read this on the class.

✓ I usually read online when I am in class because the teacher often assigns some articles and materials for us, so we need to read them in class.

The preposition 'in the class' should be 'in class' for general reference. 'Assign some article and materials' should be plural 'articles and materials.' 'For us to us' is redundant and incorrect. 'Read this on the class' should be 'read them in class.'

× I usually read online when in the class because the teacher will often assign some article and materials for us to us, so we need to read this on the class.

✓ I usually read online when I am in class because the teacher often assigns some articles and materials for us, so we need to read them in class.

The pronouns 'this' and 'us to us' are used incorrectly. 'This' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'articles and materials.' 'For us to us' is redundant and should be removed.

× But I I don't I feel it is not comfortable for my eyes so I.

✓ But I don't feel it is comfortable for my eyes, so I avoid it.

The sentence is incomplete and contains repeated words. Completing the sentence and removing repetitions improves clarity.

× Not really, because I think reading online caused the eye strain and.

✓ Not really, because I think reading online causes eye strain.

The verb 'caused' is past tense but the context is present general truth, so present tense 'causes' is appropriate. Also, 'the eye strain' should be 'eye strain' without 'the.'

× Although it is very convenient, but it's not comfortable and.

✓ Although it is very convenient, it is not comfortable.

Using both 'although' and 'but' together is redundant. Choose one conjunction. Also, the sentence is incomplete and should be finished properly.

× Watch the screen long time.

✓ Watching the screen for a long time is uncomfortable.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb. Changing 'Watch' to 'Watching' and adding context completes the sentence.

× I will read some. I prefer read some news every day about the entertainment or the finance.

✓ I will read some. I prefer to read some news every day about entertainment or finance.

The phrase 'the entertainment or the finance' incorrectly uses definite articles. Removing 'the' is correct when speaking generally. Also, 'prefer read' should be 'prefer to read.'

× From the applicate news applications such as ABC News.

✓ From news applications such as ABC News.

The word 'applicate' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'news applications.' Also, 'from the applicate news applications' is awkward; 'from news applications' is better.

× I think it is more convenient because everyone has a mobile phone and the and you can change the size of the character.

✓ I think it is more convenient because everyone has a mobile phone, and you can change the size of the characters.

The phrase 'the and you' is incorrect and should be 'and you.' Also, 'the size of the character' should be plural 'characters' when referring to text size.

× It is good for the elder citizens and the child.

✓ It is good for elderly citizens and children.

'Elder' is comparative and not used as an adjective here; 'elderly' is correct. Also, 'the child' should be plural 'children' when speaking generally.