E-books— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating your preference and reasons, using correct grammar and linking words for coherence.

Example: I prefer both e-books and paper books depending on the situation. For example, when I am traveling, I usually read e-books because they are portable. However, at home, I prefer paper books as they are easier to read and help me concentrate better.

Suggestion: Your answer has many fillers and is somewhat repetitive. Try to avoid hesitation sounds and use linking words to make your answer more fluent and coherent. Also, be specific about when and why you read online.

Example: I usually read online when I travel because e-books are very convenient and portable. This allows me to enjoy reading anytime without carrying heavy books.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically. Avoid unnecessary words and focus on clarity.

Example: Yes, I will read more online in the future because it is more portable and convenient. Also, since I will be busy with work, reading online saves time as I don't need to buy physical books.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas better and use linking words to connect your points. Be specific and avoid vague phrases.

Example: I enjoy reading various genres online. Since I have a medical background, I like reading books about medicine, such as how medicines are prepared and used to diagnose diseases. Additionally, I read books about the environment.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to clearly compare reading online and on paper, using correct grammar and linking words. Provide specific differences to make your answer effective.

Example: Reading online is different from reading paper books because online reading is done on digital devices, which is more convenient and portable. On the other hand, paper books have a physical feel and do not require batteries or internet connection.

× If I am my traveling to another place at that time I prefer ebooks.

✓ If I am traveling to another place at that time, I prefer ebooks.

The phrase 'I am my traveling' is incorrect due to the unnecessary use of 'my'. The correct form is 'I am traveling'. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause for clarity.

× whenever I have lesser time at my home, I definitely leave give preference to paper book.

✓ whenever I have less time at home, I definitely give preference to paper books.

The word 'lesser' is incorrectly used; 'less' is the correct quantifier for uncountable nouns like 'time'. Also, 'leave give preference' is incorrect; it should be 'give preference'. 'Paper book' should be plural as 'paper books' to match the context.

× Basically, when I go for a travelling, at that time, I prefer to read online, especially ebooks,

✓ Basically, when I go travelling, at that time, I prefer to read online, especially ebooks,

The phrase 'go for a travelling' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'go travelling' without 'for a'.

× because I think that, uh, reading, uh, online books are quite a convenient method for us as, uh, it is more portable and people can enjoy to read at anytime and.

✓ because I think that reading online books is quite a convenient method for us as it is more portable and people can enjoy reading anytime.

The subject 'reading online books' is singular and should be followed by 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, 'enjoy to read' is incorrect; the correct form is 'enjoy reading'. 'At anytime' should be 'anytime'. The sentence was incomplete and has been corrected for clarity.

× Yes, definitely I would love to read books online because I think data first of all adds more portable and convenient matter method in order to read.

✓ Yes, definitely I would love to read books online because I think data first of all adds a more portable and convenient method to read.

The phrase 'adds more portable and convenient matter method' is incorrect. It should be 'adds a more portable and convenient method'. 'Matter' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× Apart from this, in future I will have a hectic schedule regarding my work so I don't have sufficient time in order to buy books, so I prefer online.

✓ Apart from this, in the future I will have a hectic schedule regarding my work so I won't have sufficient time to buy books, so I will prefer online.

The phrase 'in future' should be 'in the future'. Also, to maintain future tense consistency, 'don't have' should be 'won't have' and 'prefer' should be 'will prefer'.

× Well, I love to read various genres of books on online.

✓ Well, I love to read various genres of books online.

The preposition 'on' before 'online' is incorrect. 'Online' functions as an adverb here and does not require a preposition.

× How it prepare and what sort of medicines are suitable in order to diagnose certain diseases.

✓ How it is prepared and what sort of medicines are suitable to diagnose certain diseases.

The verb 'prepare' needs to be in passive form 'is prepared' to match the subject. Also, 'in order to diagnose' can be simplified to 'to diagnose'.

× Apart from this, I'll have to read books regarding environment.

✓ Apart from this, I'll have to read books regarding the environment.

The noun 'environment' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to the general concept.

× Well, reading online is quite a different from a paper rating because an online because online is a digital platform.

✓ Well, reading online is quite different from reading paper books because online is a digital platform.

The sentence is awkward and contains repetition. 'A different' should be 'different'. 'Paper rating' is incorrect; it should be 'reading paper books'. The repeated phrase 'because an online because online' is corrected for clarity.

× Apart from this, if I talk about the paper and paper reading, it contains a lot of paper ink and I think that learning online or reading online.

✓ Apart from this, if I talk about paper and reading paper books, it involves a lot of ink, and I think that learning or reading online is better.

The phrase 'contains a lot of paper ink' is incorrect; 'ink' is used on paper, not contained by it. Also, the sentence is incomplete and has been completed for clarity.