E-books— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时应避免使用口头语“uh”，并且可以更自然地表达观点，同时增加连接词使句子更流畅。

Example: I prefer paper books because I find it easier to concentrate on them, whereas reading on a tablet can be distracting.

Suggestion: 句子结构不够清晰，语法错误较多，建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Example: I usually read online when I need to find journal articles for my assessments because there are more resources available on the internet than in books.

Suggestion: 回答较简短，可以增加更多细节和连接词，使表达更完整自然。

Example: I think I will read more online in the future because the internet allows me to find the resources or articles I need quickly and easily.

Suggestion: 回答中重复了之前的话，建议避免重复并使用更丰富的词汇和连接词。

Example: I usually read journal articles online since it's easier to access recent and up-to-date information compared to printed materials.

Suggestion: 句子结构较长且有语法错误，建议分句表达并使用连接词使句子更清晰。

Example: Reading paper books usually costs more because you have to buy or borrow them. However, online reading can save money since many articles and content are available for free.

× I cannot focus on tablet for a long time.

✓ I cannot focus on the tablet for a long time.

这里缺少定冠词'the'，因为'tablet'是特指的设备。应使用'the tablet'。

× I usually read online when I need to find some journal article for during my assessment since I confirm more resource online instead of a book.

✓ I usually read online when I need to find some journal articles during my assessment since I find more resources online instead of in a book.

'for during'是错误的介词搭配，应只用'during'。'some journal article'应为复数'some journal articles'。'confirm'用错，应为'find'。'more resource'应为复数'more resources'。'instead of a book'前应加介词'in'。

× I think I will, since you can find the resource or article you need immediately by using the Internet.

✓ I think I will, since you can find the resources or articles you need immediately by using the Internet.

'resource or article'应为复数形式，保持一致性。

× As I said, I usually read the journal articles online because it's easier to find some recent and up to date article.

✓ As I said, I usually read journal articles online because it's easier to find some recent and up-to-date articles.

'recent and up to date'中'up to date'应连字符连接为'up-to-date'。'some article'应为复数'some articles'。

× I think reading a paper book normally cost more money since you have to borrow or buy it, but you can find some of free contents or article online so it will save a lot of money.

✓ I think reading a paper book normally costs more money since you have to borrow or buy it, but you can find some free content or articles online so it will save a lot of money.

'cost'应为第三人称单数形式'costs'。'some of free contents'错误，改为'some free content'。'article'应为复数'articles'。