Science— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: Yes, I enjoy studying science at school because it helps me understand how things work. For example, my father is a hardware engineer, and watching him inspired me to learn more about technology and science.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain your example in detail. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid ambiguous phrases.

Example: Yes, I use my science knowledge daily. For instance, last week I fixed a fan that had stopped working, which saved us from buying a new one. This shows how science helps me solve practical problems.

Suggestion: Your answer shows interest but is unclear and contains some incorrect words. Provide a clear topic sentence and use correct vocabulary related to the subject. Use linking words to organize your ideas.

Example: Yes, I would like to learn more about physics, especially astronomy. I am fascinated by stars, planets, meteoroids, and moons, and I want to understand how these celestial objects move and interact.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat confusing and incomplete. Provide a clear opinion and support it with specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: Yes, I believe it is important for everyone to study science because it helps us understand the world around us. Even for those not interested in science, practical knowledge about how things like trucks or buses work can be very useful in daily life.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Provide a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, followed by supporting details. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear references.

Example: Yes, I enjoy watching science TV programs every day. When I was a child, my father used to watch them, and that inspired me to develop an interest in science as well.

× Yes, I do like studying science at school like when I was a. Kid, when I was five years old, I saw my father like.

✓ Yes, I do like studying science at school. When I was a kid, when I was five years old, I saw my father.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and unnecessary filler words like 'like' and a misplaced period. The correction removes filler words and corrects sentence structure to properly express the idea in present tense and past reference.

× He is a hardware engineer is already like to ruble know why it's going on, so I always English my stuff.

✓ He is a hardware engineer and already knows why things are happening, so I always ask him about my stuff.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear phrasing. 'Is already like to ruble know' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the subject's knowledge and the student's action using correct pronouns and verb forms.

× To know what's this, What's the?

✓ I want to know what this is and what it does.

The original sentence is incomplete and uses incorrect word order for questions. The correction forms a proper statement expressing the desire to understand something.

× Yes I do use my science knowledge daily like as last week I fixed my fan which is not working from a long time and we decided to buy a new fan.

✓ Yes, I use my science knowledge daily. For example, last week I fixed my fan which had not been working for a long time, and we had decided to buy a new one.

The original sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly and has awkward phrasing. The correction separates ideas, uses past perfect for actions completed before another past action, and improves clarity.

× But one day I just opened my friend like I looked at it, it was sold.

✓ But one day, I just opened my fan and looked at it; it was old.

The original sentence is confusing and contains incorrect word usage ('opened my friend'). The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects the object and verb usage.

× Yes, that's a subject. Named physics, I really like to learn more because of the stars, the astronomy stars, planets, so listicle objects which are metroids, everything like moons and I really like to learn about more about them.

✓ Yes, that's a subject named physics. I really want to learn more about stars, astronomy, planets, celestial objects like meteoroids, moons, and I really like to learn more about them.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun use and spelling errors ('listicle' instead of 'celestial', 'metroids' instead of 'meteoroids'). The correction fixes these errors and improves sentence flow.

× Yes, it is very important to study science for everyone, but there are some people who are not interesting in science, but for them, the practical knowledge, practical skills really needed to provide to them so that they can get engaged.

✓ Yes, it is very important for everyone to study science, but some people are not interested in science. For them, practical knowledge and skills need to be provided so that they can get engaged.

The original sentence misuses 'interesting' instead of 'interested' and has awkward phrasing. The correction uses correct adjective form and improves sentence clarity.

× You know why these things happen in their life what's going on outside even how that truck working how the bus how you write on a verse, how the.

✓ They can understand why these things happen in their lives, what is going on outside, how trucks work, how buses operate, and other everyday phenomena.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks proper structure. The correction completes the ideas and uses proper sentence construction.

× I really like to watch science. TV programs on. My daily basis is when I was a child.

✓ I really like to watch science TV programs on a daily basis. When I was a child,

The original sentence has incorrect word order and punctuation. The correction fixes these issues and separates ideas properly.

× I know my father use rewards it and I think that's why I have the.

✓ I know my father used to watch them, and I think that's why I have the interest.

The original sentence misuses verbs and pronouns ('use rewards it'). The correction uses correct past tense and clarifies the meaning.