Science— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clear and concise, directly answering the question with a topic sentence followed by specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy and ensure your ideas are logically connected using linking words.

Example: Yes, I enjoy studying science at school because we get to perform many practical experiments in the lab. For example, our teachers demonstrate chemical reactions, which helps me understand how different substances interact. This hands-on experience makes learning science very interesting for me.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and irrelevant information.

Example: No, I do not use my science knowledge daily because I am now studying commerce, which focuses more on mathematics and business subjects. However, when I was in 10th grade, I enjoyed doing science experiments in the lab since it was my favourite subject.

Suggestion: Your answer is vague and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to specify which science subject interests you and explain why, using clear and coherent sentences with appropriate linking words.

Example: Yes, I would like to learn more about biology because it explains how living organisms function. I find discoveries in this field fascinating, especially how experiments help us understand life processes better.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and lacks specific reasons. Try to clearly state why studying science is important for everyone, providing specific examples and using linking words to connect your ideas.

Example: Yes, it is important for everyone to study science because it helps us understand the world around us. For instance, learning about chemical reactions and electricity can explain everyday phenomena and improve our problem-solving skills.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to clearly express your opinion, give reasons, and use linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

Example: Yes, I enjoy watching science TV programs because they show interesting experiments and discoveries. When I was a kid, I even participated in a science program, which made me appreciate how exciting science can be.

× Yes, I enjoy studying science at my school because there are so many practical things so that we can do in our lab and the teachers also show our chemical reaction and what was the knew down and award what was well, the things are come from will find out so these things are interesting.

✓ Yes, I enjoy studying science at my school because there are so many practical things that we can do in our lab, and the teachers also show us chemical reactions and explain what is new and what is well done. We find out where things come from, so these things are interesting.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'so that' and 'and' conjunctions, causing confusion. 'So that' should be replaced with 'that' to indicate the practical things we can do. Also, 'and' should connect related ideas clearly. The sentence also has unclear phrases like 'knew down and award what was well' which are corrected to 'explain what is new and what is well done' for clarity.

× No, I didn't because I after times I just commerce field so there was all mathematical subjects.

✓ No, I didn't because later I was in the commerce field, so there were only mathematical subjects.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'didn't' without a main verb and has tense inconsistency. 'After times' is corrected to 'later' for clarity. 'There was all mathematical subjects' is corrected to 'there were only mathematical subjects' to agree in number and tense.

× So when I was in 10th standard I used to do experiement in my labs and I use a science because I just interested and this is a was my favorite subject.

✓ So when I was in 10th standard, I used to do experiments in my labs and I used science because I was interested, and it was my favorite subject.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Use a science' is incorrect; it should be 'used science'. 'Just interested' needs the verb 'was' to form past tense. 'This is a was' is corrected to 'it was' for proper past tense and pronoun use.

× So I use a stylus and.

✓ So I used a stylus as well.

The sentence is incomplete and uses 'use' in present tense incorrectly. 'Stylus' seems out of context; assuming 'stylus' is intended, 'used' is past tense to match previous sentences. Added 'as well' to complete the thought.

× Yes, I would like to learn about more science subject because there was so many things that are interesting and some discoveries are also interesting and the experiments and the result of the experimenters are also grateful.

✓ Yes, I would like to learn more science subjects because there are so many interesting things, and some discoveries are also interesting. The experiments and the results of the experiments are also great.

'Science subject' should be plural 'science subjects'. 'There was so many things' is incorrect; it should be 'there are so many things' to agree in number and tense. 'Result of the experimenters are also grateful' is incorrect; it should be 'results of the experiments are also great' for correct noun and adjective use.

× And I used to appreciate Chilensis tremendous till now I appreciate because there's.

✓ And I used to appreciate scientists tremendously; I still appreciate them now because there are...

'Chilensis' is likely a misspelling of 'scientists'. 'Tremendous' should be 'tremendously' as an adverb. The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity; corrected to a clearer form with proper pronouns and adverbs.

× Yes, that's important because there are so many things that are interesting and also we need to learn how to experiement send the discoveries of the zero and all how can there found it and also the chemical reaction and the electrons all are the subject.

✓ Yes, that's important because there are so many interesting things, and we also need to learn how to experiment, understand discoveries, and how they are found. Chemical reactions and electrons are all part of the subject.

The sentence has unclear phrases like 'experiement send the discoveries of the zero' and 'how can there found it'. These are corrected to 'experiment, understand discoveries, and how they are found' for clarity. 'Chemical reaction and the electrons all are the subject' is corrected to 'Chemical reactions and electrons are all part of the subject' for grammar and clarity.

× Yes, I loved watching science degree program because there are so many things because so still peoples are being the experiment and the show.

✓ Yes, I loved watching science TV programs because there are so many things. People are still doing experiments and showing them.

'Science degree program' is corrected to 'science TV programs' for clarity. 'So still peoples are being the experiment and the show' is incorrect; corrected to 'People are still doing experiments and showing them' for proper subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× So there was interesting and also they sold you think When I was a kid I used to participate into science program so I know how interesting it was.

✓ So it was interesting, and also they told you to think. When I was a kid, I used to participate in science programs, so I know how interesting they were.

'There was interesting' is corrected to 'it was interesting'. 'They sold you think' is unclear and corrected to 'they told you to think'. 'Participate into' is corrected to 'participate in'. 'Science program' is pluralized to 'science programs' to match context. Verb tenses are adjusted for consistency.