Science— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'was easy to me' 대신 'is easy for me'를 사용하고, 'kindly'는 형용사 'kind'로 수정해야 합니다. 또한, 중복된 표현을 피하고 문장을 간결하게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: Yes, I enjoy studying science at school because I find it easy to understand, and my science teachers are very kind and supportive.

Suggestion: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'a science knowledge' 대신 'science knowledge'로 수정하고, 문장을 더 자연스럽고 간결하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: Actually, I don't use my science knowledge daily because I am majoring in business, so I usually discuss business topics with my friends.

Suggestion: 답변에 불필요한 망설임 표현이 포함되어 있고, 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'a biology' 대신 'biology'를 사용하고, 'wanna' 대신 'want to'를 사용하는 것이 좋습니다. 또한, 문장을 더 명확하고 자연스럽게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: Definitely, I would like to learn more about biology because I studied it in high school and found it easy to understand.

Suggestion: 답변이 다소 불완전하며, 마지막 문장이 완성되지 않았습니다. 구체적인 예시를 완성하고, 문장을 명확하게 마무리하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: Yes, I think it's important for everyone to study science because it helps us understand the world better. For example, learning biology helps us understand how our bodies function.

Suggestion: 답변이 불완전하고 문장이 중단되었습니다. 프로그램 이름을 정확히 말하고, 왜 좋아하는지 구체적인 이유를 덧붙여 문장을 완성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: Yes, I enjoy watching science TV programs on YouTube, especially 'The Cradle'. The host is a scientist who explains complex topics in an easy-to-understand way.

× Yes, I enjoy studying science at school because it was easy to me and my science teachers are very kindly, so I enjoy studying science.

✓ Yes, I enjoy studying science at school because it was easy for me and my science teachers are very kind, so I enjoy studying science.

'easy to me' should be 'easy for me' because 'easy' is followed by 'for' to indicate the person who finds it easy. 'kindly' is an adverb, but here an adjective 'kind' is needed to describe 'teachers'.

× Actually, I don't usually use my science knowledge daily because my major is business so I talk about business schools with my friends, not a science knowledge.

✓ Actually, I don't usually use my science knowledge daily because my major is business so I talk about business schools with my friends, not science knowledge.

'a science knowledge' is incorrect because 'knowledge' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by 'a'.

× MMM umm definitely it is a biology because I studied biology in my high school so it was easy to understand for me and I wanna learn more about the biology.

✓ MMM umm definitely it is biology because I studied biology in my high school so it was easy to understand for me and I wanna learn more about biology.

'a biology' and 'the biology' are incorrect because 'biology' is an uncountable noun and does not need an article here.

× Yes, I think it's important for everyone to study science because it helps us understand the world more easily. For example, while learning about biology, we can understand our physical.

✓ Yes, I think it's important for everyone to study science because it helps us understand the world more easily. For example, while learning about biology, we can understand our physical bodies.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'our physical' which is incomplete. Adding 'bodies' completes the meaning.

× Yes, I enjoy watching science TV programs on my tablet on YouTube. I especially enjoy watching the cradle TV. He is a scientist and he always.

✓ Yes, I enjoy watching science TV programs on my tablet on YouTube. I especially enjoy watching the Cradle TV. He is a scientist and he always explains things clearly.

The sentence 'He is a scientist and he always.' is incomplete and needs completion to make sense. Also, 'the cradle TV' should be 'the Cradle TV' as a proper noun.