Science— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I enjoy studying science at school, especially social science, because I love learning about human behaviour and individual actions."

Example: Yes, I enjoy studying science at school, especially social science, because I love learning about human behaviour and how individuals act in different situations.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. For example, "Yes, I use my science knowledge daily because it helps me understand why people, including my friends, behave the way they do."

Example: Yes, I use my science knowledge daily because it helps me understand why people, including my friends, behave the way they do in everyday life.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words. For example, "Yes, I would like to learn more about sociology because it studies how people behave in different situations and includes many interesting theories."

Example: Yes, I would like to learn more about sociology because it studies how people behave in different situations and includes many interesting theories from important scholars.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Try to be more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. For example, "Yes, I believe it is important for everyone to study science, whether it is social science or environmental science, because it is useful in daily life."

Example: Yes, I believe it is important for everyone to study science, whether it is social science or environmental science, because it helps us understand and deal with everyday situations.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains awkward phrasing and filler words. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid fillers. For example, "No, I rarely watch TV programmes. Instead, I prefer to watch science content on social media, especially YouTube, because I can search for topics I am interested in."

Example: No, I rarely watch TV programmes. Instead, I prefer to watch science content on social media, especially YouTube, because I can search for topics I am interested in.

× I enjoy my studying science at school, especially social science because I love to learn about how to human behavior in our life and I love to elaborate how to individuals behavior.

✓ I enjoy studying science at school, especially social science because I love to learn about human behavior in our life and I love to elaborate on individual behavior.

The phrase 'my studying' is incorrect; 'enjoy' should be followed directly by the gerund form 'studying' without 'my'. Also, 'how to human behavior' is incorrect; it should be 'human behavior'. Similarly, 'how to individuals behavior' is incorrect; it should be 'individual behavior' with 'elaborate on' as the correct verb-preposition combination.

× I love to elaborate how to individuals behavior.

✓ I love to elaborate on individual behavior.

The verb 'elaborate' is typically followed by the preposition 'on' when referring to a topic. Also, 'how to individuals behavior' is incorrect; it should be 'individual behavior'.

× Yes I do because like what I said before, I want to learn about how to individual act the way they do in everyday life so I can more understand why my friends choose that way and trying to understand how the human behave here.

✓ Yes, I do because, like I said before, I want to learn about how individuals act the way they do in everyday life so I can better understand why my friends choose that way and try to understand how humans behave here.

The phrase 'how to individual act' is incorrect; it should be 'how individuals act'. Also, 'trying to understand' should be parallel with 'can better understand', so 'try to understand' is correct. 'The human behave' is incorrect; it should be 'humans behave'.

× I want to learn about how to individual act the way they do in everyday life so I can more understand why my friends choose that way and trying to understand how the human behave here.

✓ I want to learn about how individuals act the way they do in everyday life so I can better understand why my friends choose that way and try to understand how humans behave here.

The word 'individual' should be plural 'individuals' to agree with the plural verb 'act'. Also, 'the human behave' is incorrect; 'human' should be plural 'humans' to agree with the verb 'behave'.

× I want to learn about how to individual act the way they do in everyday life so I can more understand why my friends choose that way and trying to understand how the human behave here.

✓ I want to learn about how individuals act the way they do in everyday life so I can better understand why my friends choose that way and try to understand how humans behave here.

The phrase 'how to individual act' is incorrect; 'to' should be removed. Also, 'more understand' is incorrect; 'better understand' is the correct comparative form.

× Yes, it's the sociology because sociology observe while a lot of people act in certain ways and learn about individual's behavior and a lot of theory from important person.

✓ Yes, it's sociology because sociology observes how a lot of people act in certain ways and learns about individuals' behavior and many theories from important people.

'Sociology' is singular and requires singular verbs 'observes' and 'learns'. 'Individual's behavior' should be plural possessive 'individuals' behavior'. 'A lot of theory' should be plural 'many theories'. 'Important person' should be plural 'important people'.

× Yes, it's the sociology because sociology observe while a lot of people act in certain ways and learn about individual's behavior and a lot of theory from important person.

✓ Yes, it's sociology because sociology observes how a lot of people act in certain ways and learns about individuals' behavior and many theories from important people.

The subject 'sociology' is singular and requires the verbs 'observes' and 'learns' in the third person singular form.

× Yes, it's the sociology because sociology observe while a lot of people act in certain ways and learn about individual's behavior and a lot of theory from important person.

✓ Yes, it's sociology because sociology observes how a lot of people act in certain ways and learns about individuals' behavior and many theories from important people.

The preposition 'while' is incorrectly used; 'how' is the correct word to introduce the clause describing people's actions.

× Yes, because it's really crucial things in our daily life, whatever that science, social science or maybe about environment science, because it's really useful for our daily life.

✓ Yes, because these are really crucial things in our daily life, whether it's science, social science, or environmental science, because they're really useful for our daily life.

'It's really crucial things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural; it should be 'these are'. 'Whatever that science' is incorrect; 'whether it's' is correct. 'Environment science' should be 'environmental science'. 'It's really useful' should be 'they're really useful' to agree with plural 'things'.

× Yes, because it's really crucial things in our daily life, whatever that science, social science or maybe about environment science, because it's really useful for our daily life.

✓ Yes, because these are really crucial things in our daily life, whether it's science, social science, or environmental science, because they're really useful for our daily life.

The phrase 'maybe about environment science' is awkward; 'or environmental science' is the correct form. Also, 'whatever that' is incorrect; 'whether it's' is the correct expression.

× Absolutely no, because I seldom do watching TV programs.

✓ Absolutely not, because I seldom watch TV programs.

'Do watching' is incorrect; after 'do' we use the base verb 'watch'. Also, 'Absolutely no' is incorrect; 'Absolutely not' is the correct negative response.

× Absolutely no, because I seldom do watching TV programs.

✓ Absolutely not, because I seldom watch TV programs.

'Absolutely no' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'Absolutely not'. Also, 'seldom do watching' is incorrect; 'seldom watch' is correct because 'seldom' is an adverb modifying the verb directly.

× I prefer to watch about science in social media, especially YouTube because I can umm, searching what I need.

✓ I prefer to watch science content on social media, especially YouTube, because I can search for what I need.

'Prefer to watch about science' is awkward; 'watch science content' is better. 'Searching' after 'can' is incorrect; the base form 'search' should be used. Also, 'search for' is the correct phrasal verb.