Science— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and correcting grammar, such as 'pursue only one correct answer' to 'pursuing only one correct answer'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: No, I didn't enjoy studying science at school because I found it challenging and disliked focusing solely on finding one correct answer in exams. However, I enjoy watching science films and reading novels since they allow for more imagination.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question well but could be improved by combining sentences for better flow and correcting minor grammar errors, such as 'a great articles' to 'great articles'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to make your answer more coherent.

Example: Yes, I use a lot of scientific knowledge daily because I am a journalist specializing in environmental issues and climate change. Therefore, I need to read many scientific reports to write accurate and informative articles.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and detailed but slightly repetitive with the word 'inspiring'. Try to vary your vocabulary and use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' effectively. Also, avoid repeating the same adjective in close sentences.

Example: I would like to learn more about space exploration because many entrepreneurs are investing heavily in this field, making it both fascinating and promising. For example, I'm particularly interested in the possibility of extraterrestrial life, which captures my imagination.

Suggestion: Your answer is well-structured and clear. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking phrases to enhance coherence, such as 'due to' instead of 'because' and 'therefore' to conclude your point.

Example: Yes, I believe it is essential for all children, especially those in elementary school, to study science. Due to the rapid pace of technological advancements and the close connection between science and daily life, children should acquire fundamental scientific knowledge early on.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and detailed. To improve, try to make your sentences more concise and correct minor grammar issues, such as 'explanation skill' to 'explanation skills'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I prefer watching BBC science documentaries because they help me learn how to explain complex scientific topics more clearly, especially to young children. As a journalist, improving my explanation skills is important, so watching these documentaries is very effective.

× No, I find it difficult to study science especially at school because I'm not interested in focusing on pursue only one correct answer in exams.

✓ No, I find it difficult to study science especially at school because I'm not interested in focusing on pursuing only one correct answer in exams.

The verb 'focus' should be followed by the gerund form 'pursuing' rather than the base form 'pursue' after the preposition 'on'. This is because after prepositions, verbs must be in the '-ing' form.

× Yes, I have to use much scientific knowledge because I'm a journalist specializing in environmental issues and climate change.

✓ Yes, I have to use a lot of scientific knowledge because I'm a journalist specialising in environmental issues and climate change.

The quantifier 'much' is generally used with uncountable nouns in negative sentences or questions. Here, 'a lot of' is more appropriate in affirmative sentences to express a large amount of uncountable noun 'scientific knowledge'. Also, 'specializing' is corrected to British English spelling 'specialising' to match the context.

× As such topics are very complicated.

✓ As such topics are very complicated.

This sentence is a fragment and lacks a main verb, but it does not contain a singular/plural error. No correction needed here for singular/plural issue.

× I have to read many scientific reports to write a great articles, so it requires a lot.

✓ I have to read many scientific reports to write great articles, so it requires a lot.

The phrase 'a great articles' is incorrect because 'articles' is plural and should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. The correct form is 'great articles' without 'a'.

× I would like to gain a lot of information about space explorations because many entrepreneurs are investing heavily on this field and therefore the topic is very inspiring and interesting.

✓ I would like to gain a lot of information about space explorations because many entrepreneurs are investing heavily in this field and therefore the topic is very inspiring and interesting.

The correct preposition to use with 'investing' is 'in', not 'on'. The phrase should be 'investing heavily in this field'.

× For example, I'm very interested in topics about the extraterrestrial life, which is very inspiring.

✓ For example, I'm very interested in topics about extraterrestrial life, which is very inspiring.

The definite article 'the' before 'extraterrestrial life' is unnecessary because 'extraterrestrial life' is a general concept here. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural.

× Yes, I think it is essential for all children to learn science, especially in elementary schools.

✓ Yes, I think it is essential for all children to learn science, especially in primary schools.

In British English, 'primary schools' is the more common term instead of 'elementary schools'. Also, no article is needed before 'elementary schools' or 'primary schools' when speaking generally.

× This is because the speed of technological advancements is very rapid, and daily life is deeply related to science, so children should get the fundamental knowledge.

✓ This is because the speed of technological advancements is very rapid, and daily life is deeply related to science, so children should get fundamental knowledge.

The definite article 'the' before 'fundamental knowledge' is unnecessary because 'fundamental knowledge' is an uncountable noun used in a general sense here.

× Yes, I prefer watching BBC science documentaries because I can gain a lot of knowledge about how to explain complicated science topics more clearly, especially for young children.

✓ Yes, I prefer watching BBC science documentaries because I can gain a lot of knowledge about how to explain complicated science topics more clearly, especially to young children.

The preposition 'for' is less appropriate here; 'especially to young children' is better to indicate the audience for the explanation.

× As a journalist, I have to improve my explanation skill and watching documentaries is very effective.

✓ As a journalist, I have to improve my explanation skills and watching documentaries is very effective.

The noun 'skill' should be plural 'skills' because it refers to the general ability to explain, which usually involves multiple skills.